Insanity

Insanity

Lucy is a insane 16 year old girl who hates were she is. so she gets and idea. she escapes the mental home called Helping Hand and runs into a annoying, bad temperd bad boy named Ian. they travel together as "Friends" until she relises that shes falling for a complete jerk AND shes on the run.

published on March 01, 2013not completed

Plan D

When the nurse came in the first thing she saw was stuff thrown all over the room. the chairs thrown around and the furniture torn up and disaraid. papper riped and distroyed. Lucy  sceamed and ran tord her. she felt those evil vindictove hands on her neck then... nothing


  Well that was fun i thought. i ran out in the hall dashing tourd the Exit.
i could hear the siren and new this just mite work. as i ran down the stairs i could feel my heart pumping. it was almost hard to breath i finnaly jumped over the railing and crashed to the ground. i dashed tourd the door wich lead to the lobby.
im not gonna make it i thought running for the outside door. the police offices and workers ran after me.
"you can do it" shouted viv. I believed it.
I ran out the door and herd shouting behind me.
the gate begane closing so i took the hard way out. i jumped on the fence and started climbing up. one officer grabbed my leg and i smashed his face with my foot.
i jumped over to the other side and kept running.
i kept running even when i thought my heart was gonna burst. i took i dive into the woods and triped over a root.
I started rolling down and i banged my head "ow shit" viv moaned so did i.
When i stopped rolling i herd the police siren vroom bye. i looked aroumd and took a whife of fresh air.
"Viv..." i wisperd
"yes" she asked
"where free"
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on May 03, 2014
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on April 15, 2013
Interesting!!
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on March 16, 2013
Interesting!!
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on March 16, 2013
nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!
iv never seen sucker punch but if its familiar then crap I have to re wright the story... I hate it when tht happens
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on March 15, 2013
This seems familiar to the movie sucker punch.... It's pretty good though!
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on March 15, 2013
Its ok!!
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on March 10, 2013
oh god I know im a terrible speller O.O
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on March 10, 2013
its good but u spelled alot of words wrong
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on March 09, 2013
Ha!!!! I spelled watch wrong!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
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on March 07, 2013
Whatch your spelling!!!!! This is hard to enjoy if I cant understand it!!!!!! =[
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on March 05, 2013