This is my story that I'm working on, plz help coz dont know what 2 do 4 rest

Yummy!!!!

“Right lets look in the airing cupboard first.” I said.
So we wandered over to the airing cupboard with me carrying Hector and Bella holding my hand.
Ashley helped Bella open the red door with an oak knob.
Right lets go to the back he’ll probably be there. I said.
He wasn’t. well lets think where he would be. I said nervously.
I leaned against the wall and suddenly I fell spiralling down as if I was teleporting but  I couldn’t be could I?
Suddenly I landed with a thump I didn’t know what to do. I looked behind me and saw a giant slide that I had probably come down and next to it was a set of steep steps I made myself towards the steps but before I could reach it I heard a voice.
Nicole oh Nicole how I’m glad to see you. It was Frank.
Frank oh Frank where have you been! I exclaimed
Well I fell back and went through the door and the highchair fell forwards. And just look at this place isn’t it just amazing! He answered.
Suddenly I looked at my surroundings I realized that everything was made out of sweets!
There was grass made from short bits of shoe laces, clouds made out of candyfloss, in the distance you could see mountains made from dough with gummy bears climbing on them and a river made from hot chocolate!
Suddenly there was a squeal of laughter as Ashley, Bella and Hector came down the slide and on the floor with a bump!
Oooooooooh! Ashley gasped.
Right I suppose as we’re all together safely we might as well explore. I said sensibly
To right we will! Cried Ashley.
Lets go over there first . I said pointing to the mountains with a sprinkle of icing sugar on top.
So we raced over with Hector on my hip and Bella on Ashley’s back.