Do you understand?

Do you understand?

This is about different thoughts that's been running through my head, and I guess I've just made them into a story. I'd appreciate it if you didn't leave any abusive comments as these stories were written in dedication to people who I love so dearly but have passed away...

published on February 23, 2013not completed

If I saw you tomorrow

If I saw you tomorrow
I'd have a hundred questions to ask
where did you go
why did you leave
why did you walk out the door
I expect your replies would be answered with smiles
as that's the thing you're best at
you'd answer with honesty
you're an honest person
that's why I admire you
I'd love to be you
a person of laughter
with happiness, love forever after
but I could easily
answer the questions
that I asked myself
you went to heaven
you had resigned yourself
you had to rest in the clouds
I know that now
it's not a lie
you had flown to the sky
and to be honest
I'd never met you
but Lord wouldn't I
love to see you
meet you
greet you
and never let you go
as I said I'd never met you
but there is always some hope
for photos and videos have been shown
but nothing can replace a memory
so if I seen you tomorrow
no questions would be asked
I'd say hello
and give Hodgie hugs
hold you and keep a firm grasp
my embrace would last for eternity
forever
all my life
if you'd come back as an angel
you'd be sure to last infinitely...
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on February 07, 2014
it deep and moving
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on November 13, 2013
:)
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on September 30, 2013
So touching :((
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on September 28, 2013
:) nice
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on September 21, 2013
Thank you
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on March 01, 2013
okay
it was good
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on February 28, 2013
Rayne used to be my friend, I just wrote she was my best friend because I thought she would be but she wasn't. The 2nd one was about my Granny Hodge. Did you like it? If you did, leave a nice comment please : )
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on February 27, 2013
and who is the 2nd one about
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on February 27, 2013
It sounds like the first one is about me but you said it was raine but she dont live a minute away and was nevwer your best friend
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on February 27, 2013
thanx
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on February 23, 2013
please make more.I LOVED THE STORY!
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on February 23, 2013
* So not Sp
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on February 23, 2013
:') Sp touching.
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on February 23, 2013
love the story :)
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on February 23, 2013