Do you understand?

Do you understand?

This is about different thoughts that's been running through my head, and I guess I've just made them into a story. I'd appreciate it if you didn't leave any abusive comments as these stories were written in dedication to people who I love so dearly but have passed away...

published on February 23, 2013not completed

Hands of time

Why did you go
go so soon
with no warning or sign
I would have been there
to help you through
but there's no turning back the hands of time
you were always there
for me
for them
for the ones who only appreciate you now
they were fools
acting all cool
if only I could turn back the hands of time
I remember your face
your lovely blonde hair
your smile
the glint in your sparkly blue eyes
I was on the top of the world
when I was with you
now I've fallen on the icy cold ground
there may not be
a chance that we'll be
together tomorrow or the next
but we will meet again
sometime, but when?
I'll never know
but you'll always be my best friend
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on November 22, 2017
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on February 07, 2014
it deep and moving
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on November 13, 2013
:)
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on September 30, 2013
So touching :((
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on September 28, 2013
:) nice
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on September 21, 2013
Thank you
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on March 01, 2013
okay
it was good
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on February 28, 2013
Rayne used to be my friend, I just wrote she was my best friend because I thought she would be but she wasn't. The 2nd one was about my Granny Hodge. Did you like it? If you did, leave a nice comment please : )
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on February 27, 2013
and who is the 2nd one about
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on February 27, 2013
It sounds like the first one is about me but you said it was raine but she dont live a minute away and was nevwer your best friend
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on February 27, 2013
thanx
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on February 23, 2013
please make more.I LOVED THE STORY!
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on February 23, 2013
* So not Sp
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on February 23, 2013
:') Sp touching.
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on February 23, 2013
love the story :)
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on February 23, 2013