Punishment

Punishment

after trying to take over the earth loki has been brought home and not to his punishment choosen by Odin

published on February 16, 2013not completed

The party

The party Odin stopped when he reached the hallway that led to the ballroom. He grabbed a blindfold from his pocket "now Loki please hold still this will end soon" he said as he tied the blindfold around my eye. I had to force myself to stand still and not fight back so I hung on Odin's word it will be over soon. He let out a sigh as he grabbed my chain and started to walk with me I stumble a couple times not able to see. We enter the ballroom as everything was quiet I heard my mother's heels clicking as somebody grabbed my shoulder I started  to feel uneasy. The hand pushed my shoulder down to make me kneel everything stayed quiet as I hear Odin shoes and my mother heels leave the hand stayed on my shoulder.  I soon hear lots of voice when it hit me I was too late. "Ladies and Gentlemen Please take a look as what will happen if you are him" I heard Odin yell as I sheet flew open I hung my head low trying to think and hid my face.
Odin's hand grabbed my chin and yanked hit up " This is the famous liar my son who i am disappointed in   this not be you my fellow people!" Odin yelled again as the chain around my neck tighten the hand on my shoulder got began to squeezed my shoulder in anger
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on February 26, 2014
What did Loki do to deserve this??? (Or am i missing a chapter...?)
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on September 06, 2013
Aye ie ie! So sad and... SAD! :((
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on September 06, 2013
ok i will try when i have time which i hopefully will have
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on June 04, 2013
You should write more!!!!
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on June 02, 2013
gosh, this so sad
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on May 01, 2013
ok their will most likey be more
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on March 01, 2013
I love it! If there is any more to the story, please write it.
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on March 01, 2013
that is very good i think you have found your passion
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on March 01, 2013
please comment or rate <3
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on February 17, 2013