Punishment

Punishment

after trying to take over the earth loki has been brought home and not to his punishment choosen by Odin

published on February 16, 2013not completed

Jut the start

Jut the start The door open as I barley raised my head to so his boots stand beside me. He dropped to his knees "Loki...” thor said. I take a deep breath and faced him yanking my face from my knees. "Thor before you do anything I sorry my brother" I started "I just wanted to be like you not your shadow anymore." He connected the string to the needle "I know brother I know" his voice had a strain on it. The needle started coming toward me as I jerked away "Loki stop please I just want to get this over with to!" Thor yelled at me as he grabbed my chain and yanked it. The chain kept digging into my wind pipe. His he wrapped around the chain so I couldn't jerk back. The needle touches my lip as I want to yell for mercy. Blood started to run down my face as he sent the needle through my mouth then back out then in. Thor eyes didn't even reach mine they just stood strong and stared at the string. Soon my eyes gave out as tears soon went down my face and meet the blood his green eyes pierce my heart even worse than before. His hand shifted making it hurt worst my mouth was half sown shut as I tried to fight back it yanked the string "LOKI! STOP!" he yelled madder than ever and it hurt even time his voice reach the high point. I stared at the ceiling as my face soaked with tears and blood my heart broke
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on February 26, 2014
What did Loki do to deserve this??? (Or am i missing a chapter...?)
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on September 06, 2013
Aye ie ie! So sad and... SAD! :((
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on September 06, 2013
ok i will try when i have time which i hopefully will have
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on June 04, 2013
You should write more!!!!
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on June 02, 2013
gosh, this so sad
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on May 01, 2013
ok their will most likey be more
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on March 01, 2013
I love it! If there is any more to the story, please write it.
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on March 01, 2013
that is very good i think you have found your passion
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on March 01, 2013
please comment or rate <3
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on February 17, 2013