Darkest Era VR

Darkest Era VR

Five friends, play a game together. A game that takes into itself. But something goes wrong and they get stuck. And know it's their life or their death.

published on October 11, 2016not completed

So It Begins

Takamina and Josh were wondering the town. Josh raised his arm and looked at his arm after he heard two dings. Takamina soon did the same. Josh burst out into laughter. "Jackie's bloody user name! "Lady_Artemis" That's so her"
"Oh my God. It really is" Takamina clicked Jackie's user name and another "Helldiver_Demon" this was Keda. Soon both Jackie and Keda teleported to them. They looked the same only Jackie was wearing a grey T-shirt and black trousers, she also had a wooden longbow and quiver on her back. And Keda was wearing a white top and grey trousers, he also had a long sword on his back. Josh and Takamina were still laughing slightly.
"What so funny?" Keda asked.
"Nothing, well...Jackie's user" Josh chuckled.
Jackie flushed. "Hey...Leave it out!"
"Oh no...We just thought that it was so you!" Takamina added.
"Oh..." Jackie looked around then back at them. "God it's good to see you Two! Well..."
"Close enough Eh? Jeez it's been what?" Josh asked.
"Months Jesus" Takamina said.
"It's nice to see you both" Keda smiled.
"Yeah dude" Josh said.
"HEY!" A female voice yelled from behind Josh.
"The Hell?" Takamina turned around. She saw a young girl with pink hair, she was level 12, with the use name of "LadyBlade" and had a large Great sword on her back. "What's your problem?"
"The fact Spinner there is ignoring me" She said, blowing some of her hair out of her face.
"Hmmm? Me?" Josh turned, his eyes lit up. "Wait Katie?"
"What other Bitch?" She said walking to him, she wrapped her arms around him. "It's good to see you"
Josh returned the embrace. "I've been waiting ages to see you. Haven't seen you since the beta!"
"You met me in the beta for f*ck sakes" She laughed.
"I know, I had to save someone's ass" Josh laughed back.
"Ahem!" Takamina interrupted.
Josh and Katie moved away from each other, blushing slightly. "Err yeah...Guys this is Katie, someone I met in the beta. Katie these are my friends, Keda, Jackie and Takamina" Josh said.
"Oh...It's nice to meet you all!" She happily added.
"So are you two like...An item?" Jackie asked. Keda gave her a slight nudge.
"Wha-No She!" Josh had no words.
Katie blushed more. "No no no...See he..."
"I just...She needed help..."
"And he ju-just..."
"Guys...Spit it out or leave it" Takamina ended the awkward moment. They all stood there a minute. But then...A large screen appeared in the blue sky's. They all looked up. There was a dark figure on the screen.

"Ladies and gentle men. You have helped us achieve the best selling game in the world. Now to reward you, we're making the game real. Now you are nothing but test subjects for creations that will be released into your Homes! It's not just a game Anymore! Your trapped like rats! Want to leave? Then beat this game, but good luck trying. You'll need more than level or skill. The first boss will arrive in 3 hours! In the town! Be ready! Because now! Die in the game, feel pain in the Game!  It'll all come to you in your real life. Meaning if you die Here!  You're dead forever!" Sudden the sky's went blue again. "What?" The 5 friends yelled. They looked at one another. Hoping someone would answer. They looked over and saw people gather in the centre of town, running around. Everyone started running into buildings. Soon the town centre was with large minotor looking monsters. Josh frowned and ran over quickly, Katie following close behind. "Guys!" Keda yelled making chase.

The minotors were knocking back people trying to kill them. There were 10 minotors and 3 players, all low health. They were panting and clearly hurt. "Hey! Pick on someone your own size!" Josh yelled running in. All the minotors looked to face the new fighters. Katie and Josh. They didn't charge but stood there and watched. "Hey Katie, Wombo combo for finish?"
"Too flashy for these guys isn't it?" Katie asked.
"Yeah but I wanna show my friends that your a badass" Josh smiled.
"Pft" Katie reached for the hilt of her Great sword, slowly bring it in front of her, standing ready. "Whatever you say"
Josh put his hands out in front of him, a blue light came from his right hand, it looked like a hilt. He slowly moved his hands apart, creating a blue glowing long sword. He then placed his left hand in his pocket. "Hey, everyone! Don't be disheartened! The pros are here! Watch and learn!"
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Too op! Too cool! Too...I don't know how to describe it!
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#OverLevel
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I can't wait to see the pros in action!
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#BeReady
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Pffff Takamina's reaction to my user XD
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This is awesome, getting flashbacks to SAO though :P
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Kinda the point XD
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Ohhhhhh that would make sense
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This was a good story...not a new idea (SAO)...but also a good alternate view to a game similar...
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Though it is not an original concept, the story is very good, and its own original arc. You do characters pretty well, better than I could. I just found the new chapter, read it, and the VR story looks good thus far.
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SAO...I can see where everyone says the story isn't that great, I like it, though admittedly, it is not the best. Also, no problem.
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Thank you.
Yeah I looked more into SAO btw.
It's ok i guess.
Probably not ganna copy it though XD
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I am well aware SAO is similar. But i have not watched it. So it is just a similar game. And is based off alot more than the idea of SAO
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Understandable..
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Ah. Sorry i didn't know. As said haven't watched it.
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Yes, I know, that is why I said it was not a new idea (As the POV with trapped VR players is similar to that of SAO), but also based upon what the technology's dangers could be when we reach that point. I do know it was also made as a different view than that of SAO, as hey start us out with a pro, early access, SAO player rather than a new group like you do.
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