Divergent - Amity Initiate

Divergent - Amity Initiate

This is about a girl called Nera (full name Neralia) who is in Dauntless but then chooses Amity. No copyright intended, a section of this is from the actual Divergent book, which is written by Veronica Roth and it is hers to own.

published on May 04, 2014completed

The Bread

The Bread Next morning our group sits down at breakfast. I bite into a piece of toast and Jo stifles a giggle.
"What is it?"
"Do you even know what's in that stuff?"
I look at the toast. "It's just normal toast." I look at Jo's face. "Isn't it?"
"Not quite."
"And by that you mean...?"
"The Amity inject their bread with a chemical." Jo explains.
"What?!" I drop the toast and push my plate back. "What does the chemical do?!"
"Nothing bad." Jo assures me. "It just... well...."
"Just what?"
"It makes you go loony!" Lucy butts in. "You giggle and act all innocent-sweety-pants to everything! It's a pain in the butt."
"Seriously?" I ask. Jo nods. "Don't worry, it doesn't stay for long."
"Good! When will the effects start?"
"Tomorrow, most likely." Sam answers.
"Okay, lesson learned!" I say, tossing it in the trash.
"I would hope so!" Rob grins.
"Come on, they're calling us." Lucy says and we get up and go.

The rest of the day continues on smoothly. At night I hop into bed and switch off the light.
"G'night!"
"See you tomorrow!"
I yawn and drift off to sleep...

"Nera! NERA! WAKE UP!" Sam shakes me.
"Uhh....Uhhh?" I groan and flop onto the floor.
"Do I have to carry you?"
I giggle. I stand up shakily and slide on a jumper.
"Okay, let's go!"
"Go where?"
"To the others. They've been waiting for you for like half an hour!"
I laugh. "Okay, let's go!"
Sam looks at me. "Jo wasn't kidding about that bread thing." she mutters.
We go to the canteen where they were waiting.
"Hi guys! Isn't it a beautiful morning?"
Jo grins. "Told ya!"
"So we have to deal with THIS for a day?" Rob asks.
"Yep."
"Oh God, help me!" Lucy sighs jokingly.
"Come on you guys! You're so negative!" I laugh. "Come on, I'm gonna go get myself some of that toast!"
"So you can annoy us all over again? Nuh uh!" Sam smirks, pulling me back. "We need to do some chores!"
"Chores?" I groan disbelievingly.
"Come on, I may even teach you how to play a banjo!" Rob grins.
"Really?"
"Yeah! Let's go!"

By afternoon the dreaded Bread Affect (as Sam had jokingly named it) had worn off.
"Woo, am I glad that's over!" Rob leans against a wall.
"Yeah, I never want to go through with that EVER again!" Lucy laughs.
"Hey, it wasn't THAT bad, was it?" I ask.
"YES!" they all chorus.
"Okay, okay, maybe it was!" I grin.
"Ok, guys, we need to go to bed. Remember, it's Simulation day tomorrow!"
"Aww!!" I groan. "Fine!" I get into my pjs and hop into bed.
Just before Jo switches off the light, she turns to me and smiles.
"Nera, just one more thing."
"Yeah, what's that?"
"Next morning, try having cornflakes instead."
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AWESOME!!!! I found this book from on of my friends i love it and i find it funny how i published my own divergent book of a transfer to amity seven hours ago if you want i can send you link but only if you want and again AWESOME BOOK!!!
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Okay! sure i'd love to read it :)
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thx! :)
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on May 12, 2015
This is awesome! A couple of errors (like Dauntless are the only ones who jump off of trains, the bread doesn't actually have that effect unless you're given the straight chemical and too much of it, etc.) but otherwise, AWESOME!!!
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on May 12, 2015
please make more! It's tied my favorite story on qfeast please, please, please, please, PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
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on November 24, 2014
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!
And yep, it's true!
You can't put out a Dauntless flame!
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on June 22, 2014
This is AWESOME!! I love it!:D
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on June 18, 2014
Awesome! You can't put out a dauntless flame! I'm Divergent too! (DO NOT READ THE NEXT PART IT HAS SPOILERS UNLESS YOU READ ALLEGIANT) (Everyone is, you find out in Allegiant that OUR world is Divergent.)
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I havn't read alliegent yet but my sis ruined it for me.,...,curse you sis!!!
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on May 12, 2015
It's fine, this was worth it.
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on June 18, 2014
:) thank u so much! It took such a long time though, so sorry that u had to wait :( :)
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on June 18, 2014
REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ur New Girl story is WWWWAAAAAYYYYYYY better!! :D
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Okay, but gtg now bye :)
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on June 16, 2014
You MUST write more!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
:D You too!!! :) :) :)
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on June 16, 2014
Aww thanks! You're an awesome writer NeonTiger.
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on June 15, 2014
THIS IS AMAZING, YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!
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:D thanx i will!
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on June 14, 2014
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 03, 2014
Love this!! :D
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on May 05, 2014
PS. post a message on my writing page if you want a character put in ;)
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on May 05, 2014
thanks. I tried to write in the same style that Veronica Roth uses. :"> :)
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on May 04, 2014
I LOVE IT!
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on May 04, 2014
Really good , please write more!
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on May 04, 2014
This story is amazing so far!! :D
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on May 04, 2014
yeah same!
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on May 04, 2014
I love this so far!
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on May 04, 2014
this is good!
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