Divergent - Amity Initiate

Divergent - Amity Initiate

This is about a girl called Nera (full name Neralia) who is in Dauntless but then chooses Amity. No copyright intended, a section of this is from the actual Divergent book, which is written by Veronica Roth and it is hers to own.

published on May 04, 2014completed

The Orchard

The Orchard I feel the train start to slow. I lean out the sliding door and see that the train is approaching a farm. The wind rushes into my face and I lean out further, savouring it. I breathe in deep and then reluctantly pull myself back in.
"We're almost there." I announce as I sit down on one of the velvet seats. "Hey, Jo, what are Amity headquarters actually called?"
"Well, we just call it the Orchard," Jo replies from where she's sitting. "Some call it the Peace Garden, but I personally think that's a hippy term."
"Jo, everyone in Amity is a hippy." Rob laughs and Jo tries to kick him from where she's sitting. She misses and that makes Rob laugh harder. Jo grins.
"Hey," Alena comes over to me and sits down next to me. "How's it going?"
"Okay." I answer.
"What did you get on your aptitude test?" she asks suddenly. I freeze.
"Amity." I say stiffly. That is not the truth. But I don't want to tell her what I got because it is dangerous.
My aptitude test results were unconfirmed. My tester, Tori, told me it was something called, 'Divergent,' and it could get me killed. It meant that my results couldn't be summarised, that my actions showed I could into more than one faction. I am able to fit into two; Dauntless and Amity. My Divergence is not as strong as most people's, she said, but I should still be cautious.
Alena narrows her eyes. "You're lying." she growls. "I can tell."
I do not look into her eyes, but thankfully at that moment the train squeals and stops. I quickly stand up and jump out, grateful. When I hit the ground I stop and stare. All around me there is trees, grass, sunshine, beauty. I see a pack of Amity girls and boys playing and stuffing around. There are slim long apple trees and banana trees everywhere, and I can see a greenhouse. Up ahead, I can also see a church-shaped building, but made of wood.
"What's that wood structure called?" I ask Jo, as we walk along.
"It's the Ranch." answers Jo. "Where we eat and sleep."
"It looks awesome!"
Jo smiles. "You're in for a tough time."
"Why?"
"Initiation is hard. You have to go through a landscape, kind of like the fear landscape the Dauntless use."
"Oh?" I bite my lip. I don't like to be reminded of the fear landscapes.
Jo sees my expression and smirks. "Don't worry, it's nothing to do with your fears. Everyone goes through the same landscape and there is a series of complications that you have to solve."
"Like what?"
"Well, they will have changed the simulation, but one of the problems was a little girl bleeding on the sidewalk and there is no phone available."
I shiver. "What did you do?"
"Can't remember." Jo finishes. We are approaching the Ranch, and I can see now that it has colourful stained windows with apples and the peace sign and things.
There are great wooden doors at the front and Jo goes up and pushes on them. They swing open. We go in and I see that there is a long table in the middle of the room, where everyone eats together. The floors have fancy parquetry designs on them, and as we walk across them they make a squeaking sound. Jo and I find Sam and the others and sit down next to them. There are people coming to serve us, laying out the table.
"You're new here, right?" a girl asks me as she gives me a plate.
"Yeah."
"Well, let me tell you, Dauntless," she pauses and grins. "This is going to be one hell of a year!"
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AWESOME!!!! I found this book from on of my friends i love it and i find it funny how i published my own divergent book of a transfer to amity seven hours ago if you want i can send you link but only if you want and again AWESOME BOOK!!!
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Okay! sure i'd love to read it :)
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thx! :)
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on May 12, 2015
This is awesome! A couple of errors (like Dauntless are the only ones who jump off of trains, the bread doesn't actually have that effect unless you're given the straight chemical and too much of it, etc.) but otherwise, AWESOME!!!
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on May 12, 2015
please make more! It's tied my favorite story on qfeast please, please, please, please, PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
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on November 24, 2014
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!
And yep, it's true!
You can't put out a Dauntless flame!
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on June 22, 2014
This is AWESOME!! I love it!:D
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on June 18, 2014
Awesome! You can't put out a dauntless flame! I'm Divergent too! (DO NOT READ THE NEXT PART IT HAS SPOILERS UNLESS YOU READ ALLEGIANT) (Everyone is, you find out in Allegiant that OUR world is Divergent.)
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I havn't read alliegent yet but my sis ruined it for me.,...,curse you sis!!!
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on May 12, 2015
It's fine, this was worth it.
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on June 18, 2014
:) thank u so much! It took such a long time though, so sorry that u had to wait :( :)
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on June 18, 2014
REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ur New Girl story is WWWWAAAAAYYYYYYY better!! :D
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Okay, but gtg now bye :)
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on June 16, 2014
You MUST write more!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
:D You too!!! :) :) :)
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on June 16, 2014
Aww thanks! You're an awesome writer NeonTiger.
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on June 15, 2014
THIS IS AMAZING, YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!
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:D thanx i will!
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on June 14, 2014
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 03, 2014
Love this!! :D
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on May 05, 2014
PS. post a message on my writing page if you want a character put in ;)
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on May 05, 2014
thanks. I tried to write in the same style that Veronica Roth uses. :"> :)
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on May 04, 2014
I LOVE IT!
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on May 04, 2014
Really good , please write more!
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on May 04, 2014
This story is amazing so far!! :D
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on May 04, 2014
yeah same!
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on May 04, 2014
I love this so far!
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on May 04, 2014
this is good!
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