The new guy
Sooooooooooo what do you guys think so far???????? Btw no Drew or Ian in this one sorry girls lolPlz comment and vote. I won't publish anymore if I don't get any feedback :P
So here are some questions I would like answers on ASAP.
Q1: what do you guys think of Ian?
Q2: is there any changes you guys would like to make?
Q3: is it too soon for Juliet's feelings to appear?
Q4: would you like to become a important character to steepen the plot, or create a character of your own for me to toss in?
Plz comment your answers to the questions.
My friend suggested I should add a twist in the story so here it is. Hope you like :D
CHAPTER 10 THE NEW GUY
Finally last class of the day I thought.
I couldn't wait to start practice then wright in my diary about Drew...... And Kazzy......... Okay maybe just Drew, in a friendly way.
As I sat down for Biology 2 Mrs. Sixx ( hehe) was talking to a very tall figure with copper hair with red skinnys, black vans and a Asking Alexandria hoodie. He had lots of piercing on his lip, I just didn't know what to call them....*
He looked looked to be about 6'2 and when he nervously glanced around the room he had soul pearling blue eyes.
He was very slim and probably could snap in to like a twig.
( he has canine and cyber bites.)*
He was drop dead sexy.
" great another emo f*ggot" I heard Chad groan.
I looked around and noticed Brittany and Becca foaming at the mouth. Heather had forgotten her phone existed when she paused after a selfie and noticed mister hottie.
Yup.
All the girls in the class where wanting a piece of him.
Even me.
I just earlier wanted to wright about Drew in my diary, now I wanted thirty pages dedicated to mystery man.
God I sounded just like the other girls.
" good afternoon class, I'm glad most of you could join us today" she said glaring at Zoe and some other girl in the back. I was surprised they where even in here, usually they skipped school right after lunch.
" we have a new student today who will be joining us. His name is Daniel Tavern. Daniel why don't you tell your fellow students about yourself since we are ahead of the other classes and will watch a movie today anyways." Mrs. Sixx exclaimed patting his back.
He looked uncomfterable(sp?) for a split second before giving us all a cocky grin.
" As you already know my names Daniel. I'm 17 and I like post hardcore music like Escape the Fate and Pierce the Veil.
I'm a video game nerd and I know EVERYTHING about the Legend of Zelda. I also like dead space, and other cool games like that. I'm an Anime freak and if you wanna be my friend then talk to me, if not then don't. So yeah, and I'm going to sit here because I'm about to shit myself from stage fright." And with that he plopped at the empty seat next to me. I felt like I was having a pleasant heart attack if that was possible.
God the new guy smelled amazing. I could smell his Axe and I didn't relieve I was rubbing into him until I heard him chuckle giving me a cocky bad boy smile. I blushed and apologized but he kept grinding at me.
" well, what a interesting introduction mr. Tavern. We'll today you will be watching Frozen. I'm going to sit here on Facebook so please don't bother me, you know the rules." With that being said Mrs. Sixx then turned the move on and sat at her desk clicking on the mouse every so often.
Next thing I knew a note hit me on the head and Daniel chuckled.
I opened it up and smiled.
So beautiful, what's your name?
I looked at Daniel and he just smirked while pretending to watch Anna( that's her name right?) sing "Do you wanna build a snowman?"
I quickly replied throwing it back at him and mimicking his previous movement.
Juliet? Where's Romeo?
I laughed at this. Of course he would ask something like that so I put jot down a quick retort
Rome? Why where art thou Romeo you ask? He never existed!
He read it very slowly with a sly smiling before replying
Can I have your number beautiful?
I then quickly wrote it down including my address. Handing him the peace of paper he smiled at put it into his phone.
This continued for the rest of the class period and not once did i think of Drew romantically.
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I remember when i wrote this story and it sucks so much ahhhhh why do you people like it?
@Gummyworm I'll try 2 tho