Camp Half-Blood

Camp Half-Blood

I don't know weather it was the was she talked to me or the look on her face that made me believe her. It seemed impossible, more than just unlikely, and it broke me down from the inside out, and made me stronger. How did I get into this situation? It's not my fault who my parents are! A normal life seemed just within my grasp, almost being one of the cool girls, not one of the children that weren't supposed to exist. One of the freaks in a messed up world, who still doesn't fit in. There has to be something I can do to prove my worth to the rest of them...

published on April 19, 2014completed

Chapter 5: The Aphrodites

I make my way to the door and open it slowly to see a gang of girly-girls wearing pink, pink, and light red (pink) doing their hair and makeup for what doesn't look for the first time.  They all look at me as I walk in, then decide I don't matter and get back to their stuff.  I throw my bag on the floor by the door but keep my quiver on me.  A girl that looks almost like an exact replica of what Aphrodite must look like walks up to me.  She is at least five inches taller than me and so pretty it hurts my eyes, or maybe that's the fumes from all this hairspray.
     "And what are you doing here?"  She asks.  Ugh; girls.
     " Artemis herself told me to stay here, and unless you want to argue with her, I think I should be here."  I'm in no mood to be nice to this pompom.  All the other pompoms stand and look at us and I get a bad feeling about these girls.  Doesn't Aphrodite have a son that can help, or have all the boys been kicked out of this place by these freaks of nature.
     "Wow, hey girls?"  She says, "I think this is the freak who thinks she's the daughter of Artemis."  And laughs break out in the room.  My cheeks turn red and I scowl at her.
     "Well, I don't care weather you believe me or not because I know it's the truth, and if you don't its your loss.  I say and slam the door behind me as I storm out.  I've learned that the best way to make people unsure is to be sure of yourself.  
     I walk over to find Jay, and that Percy guy; he seems cool.  They're leaning up against the wall of their cabin talking.  When I come near, Percy sees me first.
     "Hey!"  He says, and Jay turns around.  They walk over to me and we spend an hour talking about meaningless stories and random things, and I feel like, somehow, I know both of them better.



THERE WILL BE NO MORE OF THIS STORY POSTED EVER.  IT WAS INACCURATE TO THE BOOKS AND WOULD TAKE TOO MUCH EFFORT TO FIX WHEN I COULD JUST WRITE ANOTHER STORY.  SORRY IF YOU LIKED IT, ITS GONE NOW.
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That is so cool!:D
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on March 18, 2018
This is amazing Artemis is my fav Love it this should be self published or something it's really good
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Oh thank you so much that means a lot <3
I hadn't read the books at the time of writing this so I am so sorry for everything about it other than whatever you complimented.
(I have a fanfiction account with the same username)
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you do!!!! ok let me look it up
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on July 20, 2017
Do you realize that there is an Artemis cabin? It says so in the first book.
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Yes I do now.
I just read that whole series now I'm on the Mark of Athena.
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on June 17, 2014
I'm reading it now
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on June 17, 2014
Im doing another story. You should check it out if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
This is really good.<3 it
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THANK YOU! <3
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Ok, I get you. <3 lol.
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on April 25, 2014
Yeah it's fine :) I'm kind of an overprotective fan-girl for the books LOL
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on April 25, 2014
Ok thnx I guess, I just have a friend that really likes the books, and I have never read them but I've seen both of the movies so she told me to write something. We good?
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on April 25, 2014
If no one critiques it how can it get better? You are a talented writer though if it makes you feel any better. I'm sorry what I said came out as a complaint. The story is very good, I should have kept my complaints to myself and complimented you.
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on April 25, 2014
Y u gotta hater MockinglayDistrict?! JUst be a good person dude... no critics on my story..


AND IF YOU THINK ITS SO BAD THEN WHY R U READING IT!!?
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on April 25, 2014
Percy is not a blonde either. Seriously? Are you sure you read the books?
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on April 25, 2014
And thnx Pratzie, Chapter 5 coming soon, look 4 it.
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on April 25, 2014
WELL SORRY MockingjayDistrict, but they need to be in those cabnis for a later part of the story... so.
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on April 25, 2014
Chapter 5??
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Maybe... But I'm doing a new story now so you should check that out if you want more. Its called "If Percy said 'yes'".
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on April 21, 2014
Did u not read the books and see the movies or something? I'm pretty sure you didn't read the books since there IS an Artemis cabin. Honestly this is more like the movies than the books! :(
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on April 20, 2014
Lol thnz so much. Its not done yet so expect more if you want to look for it.
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on April 19, 2014
Ha they believe their birth mother is Artemis, a Greek goddess but they don't believe they could be twins XD
Good story :)
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on April 19, 2014