Camp Half-Blood

Camp Half-Blood

I don't know weather it was the was she talked to me or the look on her face that made me believe her. It seemed impossible, more than just unlikely, and it broke me down from the inside out, and made me stronger. How did I get into this situation? It's not my fault who my parents are! A normal life seemed just within my grasp, almost being one of the cool girls, not one of the children that weren't supposed to exist. One of the freaks in a messed up world, who still doesn't fit in. There has to be something I can do to prove my worth to the rest of them...

published on April 19, 2014completed

Chapter three: The ride

We've been sitting in the car for two hours and Jay and I sit on the left and right seats in the back, each of us looking out the window, with Staphanie in the middle.  She stopped bugging us when Dad gave her an answer to 'where are we going' and 'what are we doing' questions.  For some reason, she believed every word of it.
        "About half an hour 'till we get there."  He says, looking back at us for a split second.  I can just see his face out of the corner of my eye.  This car ride is taking way too long to go nowhere.  I feel nerves biting at my stomach.  Whenever I go to school and I forget something, that happens even if I don't know what I forgot.  I go over a mental checklist of things I might have liked to have, other than my iPod, and come out blank.  That's what normally happens, and I don't realize what I'm missing until it's too late.  Why have good instincts like that if they can't tell you what it is?
        We sit daydreaming for the next half hour until we pull up on the side of the road to meet a large forest.  My first instinct is to climb one of the giant pines that make it up, but that's not 'lady like'  says my not-mom.         
        My door is opened but I can't get out because Stephanie is already on top of me and out of the car.  I unbuckle and pull myself out of the car.  Jay is already at the trunk getting his things.  He didn't pack much more than I did, and he also had grabbed his bow.  By the time I make it around to the back of the car he already has everything in his arms and is out of the way, so I grab my things and follow my Dad into the forest.  
        He seems to know where he's going, whereas the rest of us are just following him.  We find ourselves at a large entryway with a huge sigh on an arch that, sure enough, says 'CAMP HALF-BLOOD'.  Maybe this wasn't so bogus after all.
        Dad steps back and motions for us to step forwards, through the gates.  We do, slowly, then Stephanie shouts,
        "I want to go too!"  And runs after us, and I brace myself for the freakishly strong hugs she gives.  She just about reaches us when she seems to hit some invisible force field like thing on the gate.  I almost laugh.  Almost.  She blinks back shock and sits in between my not-mom's legs like a baby penguin.  She pets her and explains to all of us,
        "Only demigods can pass that shield.  That's why you're safe here."  She informs us sadly, like she wishes she could come too.  I have no idea what awaits us in there, or how I'm going to cope.  This is real, but we are NOT twins.  The more I tell myself the less true it gets.
        I take one last look at my family.
        "I love you."  I squeak out, before turning to avoid tears.  NO way am I crying on my first day at wherever this is.
        "Me too.   Bye."  Jay says and turns his back as well.  We start walking and I can already hear noises ahead.
        "Do you think we really are-"  Jay starts
        "No." I Interupt, "No way.  We don't look alike.  At all."  Even as I say it I know it's not true.  He nods and we continue down the path.
        "Hey look!  New kids!"  Someone shouts.  All the noise tapers down and a circle forms around us.  We are in the middle of a clearing bieng stared at my many, many people.  I do not like this one bit.  Some daughter of Artemis I am.
        "Children of who?"  Another voice shouts.  I see my chance to have some fun with them.
        "Guess."  I say before Jay can interrupt.
        "Names first."  the second voice answers back.
        "Paige and Jaydon."  I say back.  No need to shout anymore because there's no noise left.
        "Aphrodite!"  A girl yells.  I shake my head.
        "Athena!"  Another shouts.  No again, so I nod no.
        "Poseidon!"  The first voice shouts.  I shake my head again.
        "God or Goddess?"  Someone shouts.  I think it was the girl who said Athena.  I let Jay answer this one.
        "Goddess."   There is a moment of silence.
        "Demeter."  Someone says.  Jay shakes his head.
        "We give up!  Just tell us already!"  Someone cries defeat.
        "You wouldn't believe it."  I say.
        "Try us."  A different voice says.
I hesitate, but both of us yell,
        "Artemis."  And gasps erupt from the crowd.  Denial oozes from them until someone steps into the middle.
        "That's impossible; she's a virgin goddess.  She doesn't have children, she has huntresses."  She says, but I shake my head all the way through.
        "No.  That's what she wanted the world to think.  Did you really expect the goddess of childbirth to not have any of her own?"  she stares at me unblinkingly then walks back out of the dispersed circle.  Jay has gone off somewhere, and I'm all alone.
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That is so cool!:D
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on March 18, 2018
This is amazing Artemis is my fav Love it this should be self published or something it's really good
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Oh thank you so much that means a lot <3
I hadn't read the books at the time of writing this so I am so sorry for everything about it other than whatever you complimented.
(I have a fanfiction account with the same username)
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you do!!!! ok let me look it up
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on July 20, 2017
Do you realize that there is an Artemis cabin? It says so in the first book.
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Yes I do now.
I just read that whole series now I'm on the Mark of Athena.
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on June 17, 2014
I'm reading it now
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on June 17, 2014
Im doing another story. You should check it out if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 17, 2014
This is really good.<3 it
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THANK YOU! <3
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on June 17, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Ok, I get you. <3 lol.
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on April 25, 2014
Yeah it's fine :) I'm kind of an overprotective fan-girl for the books LOL
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on April 25, 2014
Ok thnx I guess, I just have a friend that really likes the books, and I have never read them but I've seen both of the movies so she told me to write something. We good?
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on April 25, 2014
If no one critiques it how can it get better? You are a talented writer though if it makes you feel any better. I'm sorry what I said came out as a complaint. The story is very good, I should have kept my complaints to myself and complimented you.
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on April 25, 2014
Y u gotta hater MockinglayDistrict?! JUst be a good person dude... no critics on my story..


AND IF YOU THINK ITS SO BAD THEN WHY R U READING IT!!?
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on April 25, 2014
Percy is not a blonde either. Seriously? Are you sure you read the books?
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on April 25, 2014
And thnx Pratzie, Chapter 5 coming soon, look 4 it.
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on April 25, 2014
WELL SORRY MockingjayDistrict, but they need to be in those cabnis for a later part of the story... so.
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on April 25, 2014
Chapter 5??
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Maybe... But I'm doing a new story now so you should check that out if you want more. Its called "If Percy said 'yes'".
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on April 21, 2014
Did u not read the books and see the movies or something? I'm pretty sure you didn't read the books since there IS an Artemis cabin. Honestly this is more like the movies than the books! :(
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on April 20, 2014
Lol thnz so much. Its not done yet so expect more if you want to look for it.
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on April 19, 2014
Ha they believe their birth mother is Artemis, a Greek goddess but they don't believe they could be twins XD
Good story :)
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on April 19, 2014