Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

2nd experiment

2nd experiment Jackie
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I wake up and find myself in some sort of laboratory. It's extremely large, but has a lot of space. I see Eggman at a computer. It's very faint though, as I am inside a machine. Eggman looks at me, then opens the glass door. He holds a syringe in his hand.
"Finally. You're awake," he says.
"What's it to you?"
"One thing we must get clear here, Jackie," he begins. "You like being with the boys, don't you? You've opened your heart to them. And they have to you, too. I'm not kidnapping you, Jackie. I'm offering you the chance to start a new life. To be like them. Like Sonic."
"Why do you care, Eggman?" I challenge him.
"My dear, I know how much you are bullied. That is why you are my second experiment in this. I just inject you with this serum that knocks you unconscious, then you'll wake up a whole new person."
Second experiment?
"So someone else had this done before me?" I ask him.
"Yes. You can trust me. I've done this before."
He flicks my hair away from my neck and inserts the needle, pressing down on the plunger.
"Just lie down and close your eyes. Everything will be fine," he says.
The last thing I see is that he closes the glass door.

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When I wake up this time, I'm in a cell. I look around, and the cell is small. I see someone approaching the door, with a glass shard. He throws it at the back of my head. I scream and take it out, and I see my reflection.
"Oh my God," I say.
Eggman was true to his word.
He made me a different person, like he said.
He turned me into a Mobian!
"Looks like you're his second experiment," someone says. Someone in the cell.
I turn and see a light blue hedgehog. "I was his first. I used to be a human too."
"You're... the girl who... who went missing?" I ask.
"Yes and no," she says. "I'm Sapphire. It was said I went missing, but I never was. 5 years ago, Sonic and the others landed here, and I met them. But Eggman got me. He turned me into a Mobian, and the whole town I lived in went crazy. There were suddenly loads of search parties."
"Well they wouldn't give a toss about me," I reply. "No one likes me, because I'm different. Sonic and the others are the only ones who care about me now."
"You have me now," Sapphire tells me, and drags me into a hug. "And we're gonna get out of here. Any ideas?"
I look around and see an air vent. "Up there. C'mon," I say, and I start climbing up to the vent, Sapphire close on my heels.
"So," I start. "what's it like being a Mobian?"
"You get used to it. You get cool new skills you couldn't have as a human," she replies. "You're a hedgehog now, so you can jump higher."

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We reach the end of the vent, and we find ourselves outside the machine.
"The others will be here soon," she says. "By the way, I never got your name. What is it?"
"I'm Jackie," I reply.
"You're Jackie?! Oh my God," she says. "It's true... you're the one destined to save us!"
"So they say."
"Look, here they come! Sonic! Over here," Sapphire shouts to an oncoming plane.
"Sapph!" I hear Sonic calling back. "You're okay! Hey, who's this?"
I turn round to Sapphire. "Forgot to tell you. Sonic hasn't seen me like this before." Then I turn to face Sonic. "Sonic it's me, Jackie."
"Jackie?" He asks me. "What happened to you?"
"Eggman did this to me," I reply. "He said he could give me a new life as a new person. And he was right. He's turned me into a hedgehog. Like you."
"Look, no time for that," Sapphire interrupted. "We gotta get back to Mobius!"
"The capsule's in the park," I remind them. "Come on!"
And at that we boarded the plane and flew back to my house to pick the others up, then to the park.
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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