Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Stupid Manic

Stupid Manic Sonic
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When you're hanging with your friends, there's nothing better, believe me. But sometimes it ends up in chaos. Worst part, you can never tell which moment is which. It's so unpredictable. And anyone who says they've NEVER had a moment of chaos and ruin is a big fat liar. Because I've had a LOT of chaotic moments in my life. Just one after the other. And it'll never stop.
Worst part of it all is you never expect it to come. Something normal's happening one minute, and the next some idiot messes it all up.

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Tails has been working on this machine lately, so he's not been out a lot. The guys couldn't take it anymore so they started hanging out with him in his lab.
And that included me, too.
He keeps telling us about what the machine does in this fancy shmancy wording form. None of us understand him either. We just stare at him with blank expressions.
"You really don't get it?" he finally asks. "Fine. Put simply, you press a button, and it will teleport to the location installed into that button."
Oh, so that's what it does. Pretty sweet.
"So, wait, if we wanted to go to somewhere like the mystic ruins," Knuckles says "we just press the button and it takes us there?"
"Exactly," Tails replies. Glad to know Knucklehead understands.
I take a closer look at the machine. It's shaped like a capsule - the type that Eggman uses to capture animals - but it looks more comfortable. And right at the top is his signature: his 2 yellow tails. Who would've thought a fox could build a machine like this, then wire it up?
Incredible, or what?
"Can I try it yet Tails?" Manic blurts out.
"Not yet Manic," Tails says. "I know I promised you could, but it's not finished yet."
And I can tell it won't be for another few hours.

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"Finally finished!"
And about time, too.
Everyone crowds around to see the machine in its finished form. Shadow shoves the others out the way.
I swear to God, he needs anger management.
Manic rushes to the front to get first test at the machine, just as Tails promised.
"All right, Manic," Tails says "It's highly dangerous, so don't press too many buttons at the same time."
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. Let's go somewhere," Manic shouts. Some of the others raise their fists in agreement and cheer. I just shrug my shoulders at Tails, and he does the same.
We hear a sound coming from the machine, like it's going haywire.
"Oh no," Tails groans. He runs to the machine to stop Manic, and so do the rest of us.
"Manic what did you do?"
"You stupid idiot Manic!"
"What the hell did you press?"
The door closes and locks behind us as I run in after the others.
Trapped.
Shadow loses his temper and places his hand around Manic's throat. "You idiot Manic! You stupid idiot! WHAT DID YOU PRESS?!"
But Manic doesn't get to answer. Because the machine activates Chaos Control all by itself, without the Emeralds.
Manic, you idiot, what have you done?
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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