Tana the Hedgehog

Tana the Hedgehog

This is the story of Tana the Hedgehog. I just thought, 'I'll tell Qfeasters Tana's story. Whyever not?' Tana the Hedgehog is my secong sonic fan character. My first one is for Sonic Underground, and my third one would make for more of a history lesson then a story. So, I have chosen Tana to make a story about. Also, I feel awkward whenever I make a really short or long chapter. So I will mark if they are especially short or long on the chapter titles.

published on April 04, 2014not completed

Swirling Lights. (short)

Swirling Lights. (short)
I heard something and saw a strange light coming from around the corner. I rushed towards light and saw it. It appeared to be a swirling mass, or a circling light.... I'm still not sure how to describe it! It was colorful, I remember that, and I was terrified of whatever it was. Yet, as scary as it was, it was amazing, and appeared welcome. I couldn't move. It felt like half of my body wanted to run away as fast as I could, but the other half wanted to reach out and touch it. What was this thing?
I just stared at the lights. It was beginning to get smaller, like it was going to disappear. I finally gave in to my curiosity. I wanted to investigate it before it was gone. Walking towards it, I reached out my hand. It was warm, but the second I touched it I was being pulled into it. I screamed as I was sucked into the light. There was a dizziness in my head, and I passed out. All I remember are colorful lights twisting around everywhere I looked.
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Cool :))
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on July 09, 2014
Np ^_^
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on April 26, 2014
:) Thank you!
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on April 13, 2014
Thumbs up
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on April 13, 2014
Amazing
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on April 08, 2014
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on April 07, 2014
Thanks :)
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on April 05, 2014