Thanks for listening

Thanks for listening

Hey I'm Anna Still this is how I became Minna (Mena). So plz read and Thanks for listening. Sorry this is my first story so ... yurp

published on April 04, 2014not completed

Anna? Not anymore.

Anna? Not anymore. I picked up the knife, and took it with me to visit my dear old dad. Once I got there he was passed out on the couch. I lifted my hammer up, and dropped it to the ground just to wake him up. It worked.
"Hey. B!tch wile your up get me a beer."
"Get yourself a damn beer." I walked up to him. He sat up and gave me an angered look.
" Anna, where did you go just now that made you change like this?" He walked passed me and into the kitchen
"To the after life." I showed up next to him making him jump.
"Anna, stop playing." he walked back to the couch and sat down. I followed.
" That's not my name anymore. father." I slowly took out the knife. " It's Minna now." The knife pierced through his shoulder blade. He fell to the ground along with his beer.
"Anna?" He asked wile holding his shoulder.
"Yes, dad?" I questioned sweetly.
"What happened?" He tried to get up but I kicked him back down.
"You happened, and I paid the price for your mistakes. Either way we both would have died. I'm just helping you. David. Don't worry. It'll all be over soon. Just hold still , and thanks for listening. Dear old daddy." I then swung my hammer into his leg causing him to scream in pain. I then hit his other leg then his arms, and then his chest. Somehow he was still alive so I watched as he cried. I got bored and decided to speed up the pace. I took the knife out of his shoulder, and stabbed him in the neck. His screams turned muffled as he choked on his blood. Soon he died. I didn't have much fun killing him as with killing Peter, but as long as he learned his lesson. I dipped two fingers in his blood and wrote.
Thanks for listening.-Minna
I looked at my sledgehammer that was covered in blood. "Oh what a pitty. I got B!tchs blood all over my sledgehammer. Oh well." I yanked the knife out of my father's neck and decided to keep it.
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on April 21, 2014
Cool story so far
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on April 21, 2014