Thanks for listening

Thanks for listening

Hey I'm Anna Still this is how I became Minna (Mena). So plz read and Thanks for listening. Sorry this is my first story so ... yurp

published on April 04, 2014not completed

No more mistakes.

No more mistakes. Cory saw me and jumped back.
"Peter!" he pointed to me. I don't remember walking next to Cory but somehow I was in the perfect spot. I got there just in time to bash him in the head with my hammer. His blood slat all over on impact getting on both me and Peter only making him cower. He tried to run from me. All of the doors and windows locked in unison. Peter went for the back door and tried to open it. When it didn't open he freaked out even more only making me laugh.
"One down, two to go. Peter." I said looking at Cory's now dead figure you could barely tell it's him. Again I don't know how I get around so fast but I love it. I was next to Peter once again. He swung the knife at me, it only went through me. "Poor, poor Peter. Sadly you chose your own fate, and sadly you didn't listen to me. So now you have to pay the price." He ran again only getting himself cornered in a hallway. He pointed the knife at me.
"Anna stop. I know what I did was wrong, Anna please stop." He pleaded. I put my finger to the knife, and lowered it myself.
"Peter. I'm only helping you. You aren't going to make this mistake again. So. Thanks for listening." I swung my hammer, and hit him in the chest. His ribs instantly broke along with his spinal cord making this an easy death. I saw Peter's blood, and got an idea. I dipped two fingers in his blood and wrote on the wall.
Thanks for listening.-Minna
"Two down, one to go."
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on April 21, 2014
Cool story so far
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on April 21, 2014