shit
your pov once we got inside she introduced me to the creepypastas that where there.
~~~time skip 'cause I can~~~
my pov
"ok now I think we need to go to bed come on (y/n) (your name ) "
and in the middle of the night I snuck out to a date on the roof with Jeff. I got back late "hidden-chan. " 'damn it she heard me I'll just go sleep with Ben my botherly figure.
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cauze reading this is freak'en messed UP (or down, which ever you choice...)
You were apparently VERY bored cauze this is like a puzzle, and every piece is from a other design of puzzle...
It's original, I'll give you that, but It's not readable enough to get 2 stars... See More sorry...
Am I suppose to be a slut, killer, player, not at fault, crazy, not human, or something else wako like that?
and It's not really readable, so I'd tell you to do it some way like this:
Elina: "I still don't know... so please tell..." (see the accent stuff and stuff like that, and use space btw, it helps)
Characters are supose to have ups and downs, or else they are perfect-ly boring...
I'd tell you more but your probably not gonna finish the story,sooooo yeah...
This is only atvice, but till your next story ^-^