I'm Just Another Friend

I'm Just Another Friend

THIS IS A LOUIS TOMLISON LOVE SOTRY!!!! Caitlin and Louis know each other because she's Niall's cousin (fiction just deal with it) he's always thought of her as a little sisteror so she thought but she's always liked him. What will one accidental kiss, and fate have to say about this?

published on February 13, 2013not completed

Chapter Eleven; Dinner & The Main Event

Louis's P.O.V.
I looked around the table again nervously; i just felt like something was wrong. Caitlin leaned closer to me and whispered "Lou, what's wrong? You've barely talk or ate at all." I patted her knee where my hand was "Nothing babe." she reclutently accepted my answer as Niall volenteered our table to sing. I wasn't in the mood but I knew everyone would be asking questions if i didn't sing with them. I knew Caitlin had a beautiful voice but when Niall made her do the solo in the song I almost died. I've never heard a girl with such a beautiful voice. Then I heard a loud bang and Caitlin was on her side breathing heavily. i bent down taking her arms as blood poured from her side. I started panicking glad that Liam had it all under control. When the abulance came I let Niall go with her but I jumped in my car and left right after them. When i got there I asked about Caitlin but they told me that they were doing sugergy on her and that i couldnt be informed on anything else yet. When they asked who I was I said I was her fieance (Sorry I cant spell it). I started pacing around the waiting room when all my mates piled in looking super worried. I noticed tear stains on Harry and Niall's face. Liam seemed to be trying to hold it together- It hit me that I'm not the only one that loves Caitlin- Zayn was biting his lip nervously and tugging on his long sleeve shirt. "S-she's in s-sugergy..." I answered the question no one dared to ask. We were all waiting for the only girl that has won her way to our hearts. Niall went outside and then I heard a loud scream. Harry just sunk into a chair wiping his face fiercely. i bit the inside of my cheek and sat down tired.... It's been 4 hours....
a docter walked out with a serouis face making all of our hope drop. He smiled "she be just fine after a few more blood trasplants it'll be like nothing happened.we all broke out in stupid grins and hugged one another. "CAN WE SEE HER?!" We all asked at the same time....
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Aww. Romantic and sweet, I hope, you write more
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on September 05, 2013
omg i love it make more pleaseeeeee
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on February 14, 2013
OMG this story is soooooooooooo romantic plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more I HEART HARRY but is he rly that bad? is it true? is it? anway i wld rly love it if u wrote more thx xx
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on February 14, 2013
I love this story! Please write more... I wanna know what Harry does.
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on February 13, 2013