Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 4

Ferone shivered despite Alpha's attempt to comfort to him. "So is there any way to get out of here?" He asked timidly.

Alpha stared at him as if he knew every answer to his curiosity. "Yes there is, but we only go there for hunting." Then he quickly added, "If you try to leave our territory, we'll stop you. A pup like you belongs with us, we really need more wolves."

Before Ferone could dare question him more, Alpha spoke again. "I will leave Dremre to look after you." Pointing his snout towards the beige wolf and then turned to the grey wolf. "And I will leave Tyun to mentor you." Ferone watched, dazzled. Alpha silently slunk away and left the three wolves to talk.

When he shifted his left foot, he winced in pain. Noow all he could think of was regrets, if he'd simply just stayed away from the ravine, he could've lived with Marigold and never realize that he was something as ferocious as a wolf and never get stuck in this strange place.

Ignoring Dremre's soft calls, Ferone found himself lost in thought, not knowing where life would lead to next. "I'd rather be a husky," He muttered under his breath sadly. Then he remembered his mother, she left him in cold dust. Ferone bristled in anger, why didn't she care for him and tell him his meant-to-be destiny?

"Wake up, pup." Tyun snapped, Ferone's left foot jerked, causing him to howl in agony. Howl? Was it the first time he made such a loud noise?

Dremre glared at Tyun and then turned to pick up Ferone. But before Ferone could reject her grip, she grabbed Ferone by the scruff as if he were as light as air. "We're going to go back to our territory before the 'Parnes' come." She called to Tyun with gritted teeth. "And don't you dare go surprising the poor pup like that."

Ferone gave up on struggling and decided to stay still.

"What's your name, pup?" Dremre whispered.

"Ferone." Ferone replied grudgingly. Dremre flicked her ears and continued walking.

I'm entering a stranger's home, Marigold noted it was bad to wander into a stranger's home. But his heart was beating too fast to dare think of pleasant moments. 'Dumb giant husky! Dumb giant husky!' He remembered cruel words as dogs all sizes giggled and poked at him. And he felt as if he was going to face a similar situation.

He felt his pelt burn as many eyes turned on him, Dremre was standing on the ledge- and when Ferone did indeed look down, he was surprised to see the sheer fall. He could barely hold it and wanted to push Dremre forward but she kept still. Wolves from all pelts and sizes looked down at him, some in disgust, some in surprise, some in fear and some in hatred.

"Who comes here?" Came a demanding voice strong and squeaky. He wasn't surprised when a she-pup walked up to him at a safe distance and sniffed. "Ew!" She retorted rudely. "He smells like squirrel-dung!"

"Sorry." Ferone apologized politely at first, but the she-pup's teasing eyes provoked his anger that he could not hold his temper. "You smell like squirrel-dung too." He snarled back. The she-pup growled at him but after noticing Dremre's impatient glare, she turned tail and ran back.

"Ahem." Dremre began awkwardly. We are recruiting this pup, do you have any objections?"

The crowd was silence until a silver wolf identical to Tyun except with grey eyes had stepped up. "We need this 'runt' to prove he deserves to be in our pack." Ferone shivered at his hostile objection and stared at Tyun and Dremre, hoping they'd intervene.

To his surprise, she answered. "Very well, pup prove yourself." She dropped Ferone at her feet, which caused him to yelp and stumble, fortunately not to his left, where the giant drop was. He watched and shivered as he saw the silver wolf eye the crowd, before he let out a soft growl.

Finally, a young brown wolf emerged, his eyes amber and vicious- without a trace of mercy. "Runt, I dare you not to say your name. But I shall say mine." He snarled and whipped his tail menacingly. "You may call me Eison, if you yield and scurry away- you will be left to fall. If you end victorious you will join our pack." Eison snickered in doubt and braced his broad shoulders, Ferone shivered and did the same.

If fate wants me to die, I must object and fight back. Ferone thought bravely.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 4 users

Comments (35)

Another chapter! :D
~Reading~
That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
reply
Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
reply
Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
reply
About Author
Report
on May 27, 2016
About Author
Report
on May 27, 2016
About Author
Report
on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
reply
Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
reply
About Author
Report
on May 11, 2016
About Author
Report
on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
reply
I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
reply
Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 20, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 20, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
reply
Crimson! You're back ^_^
reply
Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
reply
About Author
Report
on April 20, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 20, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
reply
Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
reply
YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
reply
About Author
Report
on April 16, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
reply
I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
reply
About Author
Report
on April 07, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 06, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
reply
Thank you! More coming soon! :p
reply
@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
reply
About Author
Report
on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
reply
About Author
Report
on March 31, 2016
About Author
Report
on March 31, 2016
About Author
Report
on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
reply
About Author
Report
on June 22, 2014
About Author
Report
on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
reply
About Author
Report
on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
reply
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2014
@Crimsonthehedgehog
Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
reply
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
reply
About Author
Report
on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
reply
About Author
Report
on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
reply
About Author
Report
on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014
love it
reply
About Author
Report
on April 19, 2014