Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 3

"I've never seen an outsider for quite a few Sun Turns." A soft feminine voice whispered. "And he certainly seems like a pup at its last stage."

"He's lucky he didn't miss the ledge, or else he'd be a goner." Another voice grunted. "He's also lucky we found him, or else he'd be infected by the scratches." Ferone dare didn't move, the atmosphere made his fur shiver. From the sounds of it, he certainly wasn't in heaven- or the lovely paradise Marigold called it. He was probably alive but he felt surprisingly numb.

Suddenly a paw probed him harshly, Ferone awoke with a choke and almost gagged. "So looks like he was playing dead." Came a voice of amusement. He awoke to a sharp ray of sunlight, which he'd thought he'd never see again. In front of his face were two extraordinarily large Huskies, well, at least, they looked like them.

"Well pup, you should be thanking us." The large grey husky, or at least what he thought was one- Said playfully in a broad voice.

"Don't be so harsh on him." The beige husky snapped, contrary to the amusement that was dancing in her eyes. "He's just a pup, aren't you, little wolf?"

Wolf? Ferone cocked his head at the word. "Little wolf? I'm a husky!" When he spoke, the 'huskies' looked at him blankly.

"You're a wolf, I don't know of this husky business you're talking about." The grey wolf muttered. "And you clearly look like one, you have the perfect legs, fluffy tail, long snout-"

"I'm a wolf?" Ferone interrupted him anxiously. "What's good about being a wolf? I can't be a monster! And where am I?!"

"Lots." The beige wolf replied. "Unlike most of these 'dogs' over here, we bother to catch our own food." She glanced over into an unknown distance bitterly. But before Ferone could question her anymore a dark brown wolf had padded in.

His eyes were a wise amber and seemed green in the shading of the strange shelter they were in. He glanced at Ferone with a haunting suspicion. "I suppose the pup survived." Then he added wistfully. "Interesting."

"Alpha, don't be so cocky around him." The beige wolf informed him. The dark brown wolf, which Ferone guessed was Alpha had acknowledged her with a flick of his tail. Alpha looked at him, his sharp gaze softened.

"So pup, where did you come from?" Alpha questioned him, waiting patiently for an answer.

Ferone frowned, now thinking of it- he had not known much of his origins. He remembered Marigold finding him, and the silhouette of his mother when she left, ever since, all he had known was Marigold caring for him. He recited the story to Alpha, who listened without any reaction, neither good or bad. "I do not know if the words you speak are true, but we will discuss this another time." Alpha simply replied. "Now, all I will say is- welcome to our pack. We are the wolves of the ravine."
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Another chapter! :D
~Reading~
That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
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YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
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on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 07, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
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Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
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on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
love it
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on April 19, 2014