Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

Working, Kind Of.

As promised, Lucas met me at my locker at the end of school.

"So how was your day?"  He asked when I opened my locker.

"Fine, yours?"  I asked, opening my locker.

"Not fun, but I think it will get better," he grinned.

"Nope, we have a project to work on," I closed my locker.  "Projects aren't fun."

"No, but I'll have you," he nudged me with his hip as we walked out the door. "Let me carry those," he said gesturing to my books.

I handed them to him, he was such a gentleman.  "Thanks."

"No problem."  

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His house was only a few minutes away.  His house was nice.  White with blue shutters, and a magazine ready green lawn.  It looked like an advertisement.

"My moms a real estate agent," He explained.

"Ah," I was nervous for some reason.  I had never been over to a guys house before, but how different could it be? What if his mom didn't like me.  What if she thought my dress was to slutty and kicked me out?  What if my breath smells bad?  What if-

"You coming?"  He asked.

"Oh, yeah."  I got out of the car and followed him into the house.  The inside was clean and smelled like cookies.

"Mom?" He called out.  "I'm home, I brought company!"

A woman appeared, smiling.  I saw where Lucas got his looks from.  She had blond hair, blue eyes, and was pretty tall.  "Hi Lucas, who's your friend?"  She asked.  

"Mom, this is Kasey.  Kasey, this is my mom," Lucas adjusted the books, my books, in his hands.

"Hello," she held out her hand.  

"It's nice to meet you," I said. I took it and shook it, praying my hands weren't sweating.

"Alright, let's get to working," Lucas said.  I followed him up the stairs and into a bedroom.  It was pretty big with a full size bed and a desk.  I was impressed by how clean it was.  He threw the books on the bed and went to the desk where his laptop was.  "You ready to work?"

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We honestly did work...for about thirty minutes.  But then one thing led to another and now we were on opposite sides of the room, throwing gummy bears at each other, seeing if we could catch them with our mouths.

"You ready?"  I asked, aiming a green one.

"Go," Lucas said, his mouth wide.  

I threw it and it bounced off his nose.  I started laughing, "Ha, my turn."

"That was a bad throw!"  He accused.  

"No, it wasn't.  You just don't want to admit that I'm better than you," I told him, throwing another gummy bear that hit him on the forehead.

He looked at me and his shocked face turned into one of determination. "Oh, it's on now."

Gummy bears flew across the room, I was hit countless times.  Then, I chucked one and it hit Lucas on the chest, right above his heart.  He placed both of his hands over the "wound" and fell back onto his bed.  He murmered something about 'death by gummy bear.'   I sat beside him on the bed, trying to hold back my laughter.  Lucas was really putting on the dramatics.  

"I got to tell you something," he whispered, taking one hand of his heart and pulling my closer.

"Anything," I said playfully.

"I want you to know....To know," he went on a fake coughing spurt.

Yes, this is what all seventeen year olds do in their free time.

"Tell me Lucas, before the gummy bear takes your life," I whispered. Our faces were so close to each others.  I could feel his breath on my face, if I leaned down just a few more inches, we would be kissing.

"I want you to know... that this isn't over!"  He yelled, pinning me on the bed.

We both started laughing hyserically.  His hands still pinned my wrists to the bed but I managed to wiggle out of his hold and pin him down, putting him in the position I was just in.

After some more laughing, I said, "I got you."

He nodded, "You got me."  His face was playful, but something was in his voice made me think that maybe there was more behind those words than I thought. We managed to sit up on the edge of the bed without tackeling each other.  "You got me," he repeated, his face suddenly serious.  

He took my hand and moved closer to me, our hips and shoulders touching.  The room seemed to fade out as he placed his hand on the back of my neck, and guided me closer to him.  My heart was racing as I realized what was about to happen.  I closed my eyes and leaned in.  I felt his lips graze mine then-

"Oh my God!"

Me and Lucas lurched forward at the same time, causing us to bump heads.  We both looked up to the doorway where his mom stood, flustered.  

"I'm sorry, I just, I wanted to tell you that it was five and Lucas has a baseball game at six..."  His mom trailed off.

"Oh, yeah, sorry.  I'll call my sister and get her to pick me up," I said, still blushing like crazy.  

Lucas shook his head.  "I can drive you."

"No, I don't want you to be late for your baseball game.  I'll call my sister," I smiled at him.  

I swear, he got better looking every second.  

"If you're sure," Lucas shrugged.  

We stared at each other, and for a moment, I thought we were about to kiss but his mom cleared her throat.  

"Okay, I'll be downstairs," she left, leaving the door wide open.

I groaned, letting my face drop into my hands on my lap.  

"What?"  Lucas asked, placing a hand on my back.

"Your mom probably thinks I'm a slut now," I said.

He laughed.  "You are not a slut."

I looked up at him with a questioning look on my face.

"You're just beautiful," he said.

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Fifteen minutes later, and a horn beeped outside.  

"That's my sister.  I'll see you tomorrow," I grabbed my bag from the floor and started to leave.

"Okay," he said.

I was about to open the door, when he grabbed my hand and pulled me back.

He leaned in and gave me a soft kiss on the cheek.  "Bye, Kasey," he said as he pulled back.

I smiled and told him goodbye.  

As I walked to my sisters car, only one thing was going through my mind.

Oh.  My.  God.
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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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