Patient 166

Patient 166

when a crazed mental patient escapes their room and attacks innocent people all hell breaks loose can best friends "Shay" and "Kate" make it out alive?

published on March 21, 2014not completed

"The Real Hell"

Shay flipped through her math book, sighing and then closing it.
Hearing something downstairs shatter, she tiredly stood up and walked down stairs.
"Hey mom, what happened?" She peered through the living room, terrified to see her aunt devouring her mother, and already eaten father, in the corner.
  Tears flowing down her cheek, she stepped back into the kitchen, frantically spinning the door knob and running down the silent street and four endless blocks to her best friend Katie's house.
  The door already opened.
"Katie?!" shay yelled trying to catch her breath.
   Something groaned from the family room, Shay grabbed the silver pocket knife out of her pocket.
Peering into the room she saw Katie's sister laying lifeless on the floor, a stranger over her, eating her bloody entrails.
"Get off of her!" Shay demanded, waiting for an answer.
The stranger stood up, grabbing for shay, faster then him, shay stabbed the monster in the chest, then finally the head.
   The man fell from the ground.
"K-Katie?!" Shay whispered, creeping down the halls.
"Katie?" she said again.
Suddenly she heard sobbing coming from katies closet.
Shay slowly opened the door only to see her friend, alive and terrified.
"H-HElP ME!" katie flung herself against shay in a hug.
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Oooh love it >w<
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on March 02, 2021
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on February 25, 2016
wow. i could just tell this story would be creepy just from the title :D
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on July 16, 2015
I LVE IT OMG MOOREEE
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on May 21, 2014
uhm.. this is just what i have so far.. hope u guys enjoy!
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on March 21, 2014