Obi and I

Obi and I

Obi is a fully grown turtle. Indie, a lonely 4 year old girl. Obi and Indie Rose share a special bond that people try to break, but nothing can stop them.

published on January 06, 2013completed

"Obi's gonna..he's..He's..He's gonna die!"

"Obi's gonna..he's..He's..He's gonna die!"
"Mr and Mrs Drake, may I bother you?" the zoo keeper asked the Drakes with a smile. "Of course sir, may we help you?" Indie's parents  turned round and shook the man's hand, "Yes. You may not know me, but I'm Brendan Syphilis, I run the zoo. I couldn't help but notice your daughter's relationship with our turtle," the Drakes were exchanging strange looks to each other as the polite man talked, "and well, I'd like your daughter, if she could, to help out with the turtle." Indie's mother managed an uneasy smile, "Oh, well, that's a lovely thing to ask but-" "I'd love to! Looking after Obi? That would be cool!" Indie was there, listening to it all, "What are you doing here Indie? We were having an adult conversation with Mr Syphilis." "I wanted some ice cream so I came over to ask you for some money, but you were talking to this guy, so I heard everything he said."
"Okay, honey," said her mother in a sweet voice, "I don't like the fact of you being here, nursing a turtle that's going to die soon, maybe when you're older, huh?" She had realized her mistake when she saw the tears swelling up in Indie's eyes, "He's..He's..Obi's gonna die!"
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on January 04, 2019
Turtles suck!
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on January 04, 2019
So sad and touching... I cried my eyes out when Obi died :(( :(( :((
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haha i havent been on qfeast in ages and i just read my story and the comments again omg thank you so much xD XXX
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on April 06, 2015
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on March 02, 2015
Thank you, you are very polite!
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on March 01, 2013
Awww such a cute story! So touching! :')
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on March 01, 2013
No hablo blahblahblah
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on March 01, 2013
hmmm
i hate haters
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on February 28, 2013
couple of days
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on January 31, 2013
hmm
how long did it take you
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on January 29, 2013
That's what a good story has
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on January 19, 2013
but its really long
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on January 19, 2013
thanx
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on January 17, 2013
ya

well obviously
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on January 15, 2013
Your welcome, did you like it?
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on January 06, 2013
thanx
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on January 06, 2013