Cinderella

Cinderella

In my story, Cinderella doesn't cry when she's bullied or abused, she doesn't wait for the fairy to help her to the ball, she doesn't easily fall in love with the prince!!! My story is about a Cinderella who fights for her life!! This story is filled with my emotions, optimism and fighting spirit.. it's different and i hope you like it!!!!

published on January 08, 2014not completed

Training, Holy Penitent, Kenshi

Training, Holy Penitent, Kenshi
Ever since my family was murdered 10 years ago, I have been living with the Black Cross Association. They took me in 10 years ago, while i was begging on the streets.. They are against the Royal family and work to protect all those who have been mistreated and abused by the King and his men. I, Akira Halle, had sworn to my Saya and my parents that i would avenge their death, I have promised to help the Black Cross and train to be a knight.

Swords, armors, guns, and every weapon! I can use them all! I have been trained to fight, trained to kill, trained to protect! My special weapon is the scythe: HOLY PENITENT is my scythe. Wearing black clothes, covering my face so that i'm not recognized, wrapping my long black hair and hiding the fact that i'm a girl make me stronger than any knight!! I wear a necklace having a black cross as sign of the clan, and my mother's white silver ring has always been on my Index finger. It reminds me of my promise, of my duty, of my revenge..

One day i was training in the woods and suddenly there was a thud behind me. I turned around but saw nothing. I continued to practice my martial art then i felt something approaching at full speed behind! It was a horse! A black and very dark horse, it had a dark aura around it: this horse had gone wild and would stomp and run over anything on its path! I sensed danger and all the other Black Cross members shouted "We should get out of here!!.. This horse is mad!! Lets go!!"
But i stared into its eyes and saw hatred, urge to kill, sadness! This horse was just like me! Everyone silenced when the Leader Mr Black came (no one knows about Mr Black, he was the one who took me in and trained me). I looked at Mr Black, he said "AKIRA. HANDLE THIS HORSE."
Everyone gasped and silently stepped behind. I knew this was the time to prove myself and my abilities and make Mr Black not regret having trained me personally. Without hesitating I moved forward.. The horse ran towards me at full speed. I threw myself to my left to avoid being hit by the horse! Then it turned and returned faster.. I grabbed its crest when i came closer and holding myself to its flank i mounted the wild horse! I stopped it by pulling at the crest, the horse struggled to throw me off but i resisted and finally it stopped struggling after a while. I got a bridle from Mr Black and put it on the tamed horse.
The beautiful, black horse was mine and a proof of how i succeeded in making myself a Black Cross member. I was a true knight and i named the black horse Kenshi (Japanese word for sword saint).




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on May 17, 2015
thanks @CrystalDiamond2323 !! am glad u read it :D really very happy :D thankssss
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
Write.more!!!!
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on July 14, 2014
:"> i forgot about his dream.... :"> heheheheheheeeeeeee it's not something to tell here :D
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on April 08, 2014
Yay you punky promised :) LOVE the new chapter ooooohh what was the prince dreaming of???
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on April 08, 2014
:"> thank u Celesty :">
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on March 12, 2014
Love the new chapter Kanny!!
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on March 11, 2014
:"> thanks!!! i'm looking at my notifications and as soon as i finish i'm heading to your stories ;)
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on February 14, 2014
Another Amazing story Kanny!
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on February 13, 2014
:D okkkkkk :"> thanks!! :D <3
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on February 02, 2014
pls pls inform me too;)
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on February 02, 2014
aww so nice!!! thanks coolsweeterthanother and blackcat123 ;) i pinky promise i'll complete it soon and i'll message you when i add new chapters :) thanks for your support!!!!!
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on January 30, 2014
Whoa amazing idea wish it was finished so I could read ita llll
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on January 29, 2014
Wow:-O I'm a fan of u.u r awesome :)
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on January 29, 2014
yes!!! i thought of you while writing about Kyle so i thought i should put up Kirito here :D it's a nice pic right???!!!! :D
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on January 23, 2014
it that picture supposed to be Kirito!!?!?!?!?
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on January 22, 2014
aww dont worry!!! a few more people to be killed, kill and die and then there's the happily ever after :D lol the sentence sounds like i'm killing everyone :">
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on January 09, 2014
I. WANT. TO. CRY!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :((
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on January 09, 2014
:-O:D thanks!! the best part is yet to come!!
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on January 09, 2014
WOW
Better than the fairy tale
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on January 09, 2014