Cinderella

Cinderella

In my story, Cinderella doesn't cry when she's bullied or abused, she doesn't wait for the fairy to help her to the ball, she doesn't easily fall in love with the prince!!! My story is about a Cinderella who fights for her life!! This story is filled with my emotions, optimism and fighting spirit.. it's different and i hope you like it!!!!

published on January 08, 2014not completed

Safety

Safety
I was sad, sorry and helpless. I felt useless cause i couldn't save my family, our house, our home. I walked down the streets of Belvile Village. This was the village i had lived with my family. Now i was a pitiful 7 year old, begging on the streets. For one week i stayed in the street, begging for food, looking at people walking by. Some villagers were kind enough to throw food, rotten bread, ragged clothes for me but others just looked at me and no one recognized me: Akira Halle. The Halle family had disappeared and no one cared.

Suddenly, men on black and brown horses came in the village. They were covered in black clothes, had their face covered too and i could only see their eyes. They got down from the horses, and everyone looked at them. One of them came to me, he stared at me and i stared back with anger. I guessed they were knights because they had swords and horses. He pulled me by my arm and dragged me to a man who was still mounted on his horse. The man nodded and they brought me with them. I kicked and struggled and they slapped me!!

I was brought to their camp. "You're the only Halle survivor aren't you?" said the man who had dragged me. I nodded with anger and said "I will avenge the death of my parents!! I will kill those people!! I will kill you if you try to do anything to me!" I shouted and yelled those words at them. The leader laughed, they uncovered their heads, and i saw that the leader was a middle aged man. He had a kind of sadness in his eyes.
"We"ll help you carry your revenge. Our enemies are the same. So if you help us, we will help you."
"Who killed my family?" i said surprised cause i had only noticed a Red Rose on the armor and swords of my family's murderers.
"The KING. The King and his Royal family are the murderers!" with these words, it was decided that i would one day bring the downfall of the Royal family.
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on May 17, 2015
thanks @CrystalDiamond2323 !! am glad u read it :D really very happy :D thankssss
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
Write.more!!!!
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on July 14, 2014
:"> i forgot about his dream.... :"> heheheheheheeeeeeee it's not something to tell here :D
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on April 08, 2014
Yay you punky promised :) LOVE the new chapter ooooohh what was the prince dreaming of???
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on April 08, 2014
:"> thank u Celesty :">
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on March 12, 2014
Love the new chapter Kanny!!
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on March 11, 2014
:"> thanks!!! i'm looking at my notifications and as soon as i finish i'm heading to your stories ;)
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on February 14, 2014
Another Amazing story Kanny!
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on February 13, 2014
:D okkkkkk :"> thanks!! :D <3
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on February 02, 2014
pls pls inform me too;)
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on February 02, 2014
aww so nice!!! thanks coolsweeterthanother and blackcat123 ;) i pinky promise i'll complete it soon and i'll message you when i add new chapters :) thanks for your support!!!!!
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on January 30, 2014
Whoa amazing idea wish it was finished so I could read ita llll
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on January 29, 2014
Wow:-O I'm a fan of u.u r awesome :)
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on January 29, 2014
yes!!! i thought of you while writing about Kyle so i thought i should put up Kirito here :D it's a nice pic right???!!!! :D
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on January 23, 2014
it that picture supposed to be Kirito!!?!?!?!?
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on January 22, 2014
aww dont worry!!! a few more people to be killed, kill and die and then there's the happily ever after :D lol the sentence sounds like i'm killing everyone :">
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on January 09, 2014
I. WANT. TO. CRY!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :((
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on January 09, 2014
:-O:D thanks!! the best part is yet to come!!
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on January 09, 2014
WOW
Better than the fairy tale
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on January 09, 2014