This is the story of how Jeff became a killer

This is the story of how Jeff became a killer

This is not my story I'm just retelling the tale of how Jeff became a brutal murderer! Enjoy

published on November 10, 2013completed

Moving in.

Moving in. Jeff and his family had just moved into a new neighborhood. His dad had gotten a promotion at work, and they thought it would be best to live in one of those "fancy" neighborhoods. Jeff and his brother Liu couldn't complain though. A new, better house. What was not to love? As they were getting unpacked, one of their neighbors came by.

"Hello," she said, "I'm Barbara; I live across the street from you. Well, I just wanted to introduce my self and to introduce my son." She turns around and calls her son over. "Billy, these are our new neighbors." Billy said hi and ran back to play in his yard.

"Well," said Jeff's mom, "I'm Margaret, and this is my husband Peter, and my two sons, Jeff and Liu." They each introduced themselves, and then Barbara invited them to her son's birthday. Jeff and his brother were about to object, when their mother said that they would love to. When Jeff and his family are done packing, Jeff went up to his mom.

"Mom, why would you invite us to some kid's party? If you haven't noticed, I'm not some dumb kid."

"Jeff," said his mother, "We just moved here; we should show that we want to spend time with our neighbors. Now, we're going to that party, and that's final." Jeff started to talk, but stopped himself, knowing that he couldn't do anything. Whenever his mom said something, it was final. He walked up to his room and plopped down on his bed. He sat there looking at his ceiling when suddenly, he got a weird feeling. Not so much a pain, but... a weird feeling. He dismissed it as just some random feeling. He heard his mother call him down to get his stuff, and he walked down to get it.
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Oh. My. God. I don't think I can finish. This is terrible! Poor Jeff!
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on February 23, 2016
another another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on January 22, 2014
My life in 5 seconds
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on January 11, 2014
make another!! Like a sequel or something!
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on December 04, 2013
I any fan girls wanna see some nice pics of jeff then check out my pictures ;)
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on November 12, 2013
that sounds scary good story
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on November 12, 2013
Thanks Mary_chan!
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on November 11, 2013
Thanks Alexandriasarous
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on November 11, 2013
hey i have that same pic for my series! i love it!! keep it up >o<
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on November 10, 2013
plus I'm so bored I think I might go insane
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on November 10, 2013
I did say I was passing on the story and that it wasn't mine
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on November 10, 2013