Redstar's Secret

Chapter 11

Redtail found many ways to stay occupied during the vigil, she thought of great names for her kits with Echoheart, then she slept just a little on top of Highrock, no cat could see her there, and as long as she was quiet, no cat would notice her. It was almost dawn when she awoke, so she lept of the Highrock, and realized that Thunderclan currently had no deputy, for her leader never announced one after she killed Flametail. When her vigil was over, she told her leader about not having a deputy, with no setbacks, Jaggedstar called a clan meeting.
I look upon Starclan that this is the right choice, Redtail will be deputy! All the cats started talking a giving insults to their leader, such as Hey! She's been a warror for 2 days! or, Hey! She has not finished training Snowpaw! Her leader was quite calm for such a situation, she announced that Redtail had been a great apprentice, and proved her worthiness in the Shadowclan battle, and when she killed Flametail to save Jaggedstar, and that her apprentice was ready to be a warrior today, so she announced Snowpaw to be Snowblossom. Snowblossom had been trained well, and she was given excellent feedback from all cats. Redtail raced out of camp to go to the tree Echoheart was at, whatever it was called, Great Golden Oak or something cheesy like that. She padded her way out of camp, but the second she go tout of it, she took off running to Echoheart.