Songwriter's Playbook

Songwriter's Playbook

Okay well I'm going to write some songs and then you can rate and/or comment on them and then give me some idea of what you want for the next subject of the song!! Randomness is okay, just be prepared that it might be turned into a rap. Enjoy!!

published on October 09, 2013not completed

Silent

                                  I need to know what I've done wrong
                              Why you really hate me so much
                         Why you weren't there for so long
                              Why you say that we've run out of luck
    
                                             Chorus
                                     This bitterness and silence
                                        Are another from of violence
                                      You're causing me such pain
                                        Will we ever talk again?


                                       Still don't know what I've done wrong
                                          I see you sitting alone with your favourite song
                                              I try to talk, but you walk away
                                          Will our friendship be lost for another day?
                                
                                                       Chorus

                                                         Bridge
                                                Come back to me
                                                  We could talk this over
                                               Yeah, without you
                                       It's like I'm forever tumbling off the White Cliffs of Dover
     
                                                    Chorus (x2)
                          

                              
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Aww thanks guys!!!
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on October 13, 2013
I like the first and last song. :)
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on October 10, 2013
<3 I LOVE IT!!!
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on October 10, 2013
Note: Be prepared for some awesome raps soon. Brace yourselves!!
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on October 09, 2013
Copyright LunaVonKarma.
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on October 09, 2013