Songwriter's Playbook

Okay well I'm going to write some songs and then you can rate and/or comment on them and then give me some idea of what you want for the next subject of the song!! Randomness is okay, just be prepared that it might be turned into a rap. Enjoy!!

killedbythesketchbook published on October 09, 2013not completed

Invisible

                                         You don't get me
                                   You don't get my style
                                 You don't even notice me
                                   But I have to tell you now

                                          Chorus

                               I loved you
                          Did you love me too?
                         Each time you talk to her, my heart begs you not to.
                                Am I invisible?
                              Am I not there?
                             Is that why you're with her?
                            'Cause she's locked you in her lair

                                           Verse 2

                                    It's not okay you know
                                   Just being your "friend"
                                 I've always been there for you
                                     Through to the end
                                 Yeah when I try to talk to you
                                     She just pushes me back


                                             Chorus
                                      I loved you
                                So, did you love me too?
                                 Each time you kiss her,
                               My heart begs you not to.
                               Am I invisible?
                                  Am I not there?
                                Is that why you're with her now
                               'Cause she "got me out of your hair"

                              Repeat Verse 1 softly

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