Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Angeliam :D

Angela P.O.V
They all looked at me. Zayn walked over. "Get away Zayn." "No." He pushed me to the wall. "You're mine. I'm not gonna let you hurt them. Liam or Louis. You'll stay with me. I don't want you hurting them." He whispered in my ear. "I'm not yours!" I harshly said and threw him on the ground. "Zayn, leave her alone." "No Liam! She's mine!" "No I'm not! I'm Liam's!" They all froze including me. I just said that out loud. Liam smiled at me. "Yeah, you heard her, she's mine." He walked over to me and pecked me on the lips. I blushed a bit. "Fine!" Zayn said and walked out. "Wow. We won't disturb you then. Have fun and use protection!" Niall shouted. We both laughed and Liam closed the door. "Sorry for waking you up." He softly said. "It's fine." My heart beat faster when he brought me to the bed. I've never felt like this with Troy. I laid there next to Liam and pulled the blanket. "Good night love." We kissed and I closed my eyes and slept.
Louis P.O.V
"So Eleanor. How do you think this relationship is going?" I was a bit scared of her answer. "Lou, I really don't know." What? "I've heard these rumors that you're with another girl and I don't know what to think right now." "But I'm not! It's just a rumor." "It is Lou but I don't know. You look at her just like you look at me. Like you're in love with her and me. What should I say? She's beautiful and gorgeous so I'm not surprised." "El, I only have eyes for one girl and that's you." "Then why do I have the feeling that every time we kiss, you wish that it was her in my place." "Why would you think that? I love you, not her." "Lou, be honest. I know you've had some feelings for her or maybe you still have. Just make the right decision." This is so hard. I love El but I love Angela too. I don't care what Zayn says, they are not together. I felt my phone and checked it. A message from Harry.
From Harry
Could these two pls get a room ;)
I looked at the photo. Liam was holding Angela and she looked happy. I sighed. I guess she chose Liam over me. Eleanor was staring at me.
To Harry
It's nice to see that Liam finally found someone :)
I turned off my phone. "I've made my decision." I pulled out the box and Eleanor's eyes lit up. "Eleanor, will you marry me?"
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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