Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Fake kiss

Fake kiss
Angela P.O.V
"Phew! I almost thought that Andy was gonna get a new toy but he got a puppy! Cool! Now Buzz and Woody don't have to worry anymore." Liam chuckled. "You liked it?" "Yeah, I guess it was cool." It was a nice movie and I loved Buzz. He was now my favorite character. "So? Who'd you like better, Woody or Buzz." Liam asked. "Buzz, To infinity and beyond!" Liam smiled. "Yeah, I like him too." "Me too!" Louis shouted in my ear. "Louis, I'm right here! You don't have to shout." "Oh right, sorry. And stop calling me Louis. It's either Lou, Tommo or Boobear!" Zayn took hold of my arm. "What the..." "We need to talk again." "Zayn! What are you doing? Let her go!" Louis grabbed my other arm. "Louis, let go of her arm, right now!" "No!" Zayn was fuming. "Louis. It's just a talk. Nothing's wrong. Don't worry." "But..." "You heard her, nothing's wrong, just a talk." Louis let go and Zayn walked up the stairs. Again he locked the door. "Ok Trees, I think you're a little too close to Louis." "I think you're a little close." "Shut up! I told you to back off, didn't I? Or was I not clear enough?" "You were perfectly clear but what did I do? I stayed with Liam not Louis. He just said that randomly to call him Lou, Boobear or Tommo." "You stayed with Liam during the movie but I could hear you laughing and joking around with Louis in the kitchen." "What are you? A stalker?" "I'm just being a friend!" Zayn shouted and punched the wall. Louis and Liam banged the door. "Zayn! What's going on?" They started kicking the door, trying to break it down. "Stay away from Louis." "No!" I spat in his face but he just wiped it away. "Ok." He smirked and opened the door. Louis and Liam stumbled. Zayn then leaned in, closing the gap between us and kissing me. His lips were warm and he licked my bottom lip, asking for entrance. At first I was shocked but I let him. "Zayn, what the?" Louis! I opened my eyes and pushed Zayn away. I wiped my mouth before running to the bathroom to wash my mouth. "What the heck were you guys doing in here?" Louis angrily shouted. I washed my mouth and went back. "Nothing." Zayn answered. What a liar! "Lou." "Don't call me that!" My eyebrows furrowed in confusion. "Wait, what?" "Sorry, I, never mind. But seriously, I was scared. I thought Zayn hit you but I guess I was wrong..." "Lou, are you angry that Zayn and I kissed?" "No!" "Good, because we're together now." Zayn said. What? "You are? I mean wow, congratulations!" Liam and Louis left. "Why did you say that and more importantly, why did you kiss me?" "So that Louis stopped liking you. If we were together, he'd never interfere." "So, we're just gonna pretend that we're together?" "Yep and if you don't, then don't be surprised when you stay in the hospital for a while." "I'm not gonna pretend! I'm not gonna lie!" "You'll do what I say!" I grabbed Zayn and pushed him out onto the stairs. His body hit the floor with a loud thud and the boys came rushing. "What happened?" They all looked up at me. "Angie, did you push him?"
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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