Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

I hate him and he hates me.

I hate him and he hates me. Angela P.O.V
Louise came in with a bunch of cookies and smiled. She was wearing a short summer dress and she looked really beautiful. I was almost jealous, ok maybe a bit.  She waved and sat down. "Hey." She cheerfully said. She grinned widely. She was very excited. This made me laugh a bit. "Angelaaaaa!!!!" A funny voice shouted. A boy with red skinny jeans and red stripes entered. Louis. "Louis!" Louise gasped and tried to hide her excitement but didn't really succeed. "Well hello there beautiful." He said and kissed her hand like a gentleman. "I can't believe I'm talking to THE Louis Tomlinson." She said and Louis chuckled. "What's your name love?" His eyes were sparkling and he was smiling. He looked so happy. "Louise." Louis's mouth dropped. "No way." I heard him whisper. "Yes way." I said. Louis and Louise stared into each other's eyes. Love at first sight. "We'll see you later Angela." Louise half shouted and they both left. I pressed a button and a nurse ran in. "Is something wrong Mrs Trees?" The fat nurse asked. "Call me Angela and no, nothing's wrong. I just wanted to know if I could borrow a magazine to read? Please?" "Oh ok. Sure." She said with a hint of annoyance in her voice. She came back and left quickly. I picked up the magazine. ZAYN AND PERRIE'S FIRST DATE. My stomach turned and I felt a bit sick. I continued reading and saw pictures. They looked so happy. ZAYN SURPRISED PERRIE BY ASKING HER OUT. THEY WENT TO THE BEACH AND HAD A SMALL BUT ROMANTIC DINNER. THEY LOOKED SO CUTE TOGETHER. NOT ONLY THAT BUT APPARENTLY THE COUPLE WAS SPOTTED KISSING. A picture of him and Perrie kissing was shown. I didn't even notice I was crying till tears fell on the appear and wet it. I just ignored the tears and read. "I don't think you wanna read that." A hand grabbed the magazine and tossed it on the chair. I couldn't even look up to see who did that. "Angie. If you need to cry, my shoulder is always free." "Li-Liam." I broke down in his arms and he hugged me tightly. "Why Liam? Why am I crying?" I asked and stuttered a bit. "You love him Angie." "Loved him." Liam cupped my face and kissed my cheek. "I love you Angela, never forget that. You're my Angel." "I love you too Liam." I was really happy that he was my boyfriend but somehow I still had feelings for Zayn. I felt my phone vibrate and opened the message. From Zayn: Hey Perrie, wanna go out sometime? How bout tonite? ;) Love you xxx
I deleted the message and cried harder. He was such a jerk. First he confesses to me then when I'm in the hospital, weak and fragile, he leaves me when I need him the most and dates another girl. From Zayn: Sorry, sent to the wrong number... I read his text. "Zayn." I whispered. I threw my phone on the ground and wiped my tears. "You know what Liam? I'm not gonna shed tears for a selfish, stupid jerk!" I shouted. Now all I felt was hatred towards him. How did I even like him in the first place? From now on, I'll always hate Zayn. "Angela, I don't think that's poss..." "I hate him Liam." I screamed and heard the door open. There stood Zayn with a hurt expression but that quickly changed to anger. "I hate you too sl*t!"
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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