Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

The challenges

The challenges Niall P.O.V
I opened the door and saw a note on my bed. "Hey Niall, you and Angie aren't really good friends yet. I mean nothing has happened between and you and you barely speak so she doesn't trust you a lot. Hurry over to the place where you first met.  A challenge will be waiting." The place where we first met was the living room, weird. I went downstairs and saw the computer on the table. How did that get here? It was still on and I heard a voice speak. "Hello Niall. Welcome to your challenge." A dark voice said. "Now the challenge. I will ask you a couple of questions about Angela. Each wrong answer, she gets cut or hit, got it?" "Ye-yes." "Good. First question. What's her full name?" "Um.. Do you also want the middle name?" "Yes." "Angela...." I froze. I don't know her full name, how should I know this? I only know her last name, think Niall, think! "Angela Trees." I said. "Middle name?" No! "Darcy." Angela whispered. I didn't really hear it properly so I'm guessing he didn't hear her. "5,4,3...." "Angela Darcy Trees!" I said quickly. "Right! Next question, what's her favorite color?" Sh*t. Is this like 20 questions? Think! "Blue?" "Wrong!" No! I heard a scream and my heart beat faster. Angie! "Now, what are her parents called?" Why was he giving me the hard ones? "I don't know." Another scream. I couldn't bare it anymore so I shut the computer. I've failed you Angie, I'm so sorry. I heard a loud bang before dropping to the floor.
Louis P.O.V
"At midnight in the park. I will be waiting." Was he coming in person? I looked at the time. 4:30 pm. I sighed. There's nothing much I can do, except wait.
Zayn P.O.V
"At the aquarium, you shall go. Be there and face your fears." My fears? The aquarium was huge and there weren't a lot of people. I paid and got in. Where to go from here? A note was taped on the wall and I read it. "I love sharks! What about you?" I ran to the sharks section and saw Angela hanging there. "Angie!" Someone lowered her and she fell in the water. No! I hate water! I can't swim, what do I do? Be there and face your fears! No, I can't! There has to be someone around. "Quickly Zayn, she will drown!" I heard a familiar voice shout. If I really love her then I'll do it. I took my jacket off and jumped in the water. Holy crap, it's freezing. I couldn't see well but there she was, all the way at the bottom. I grabbed her. Swimming fast. I didn't really know how to swim but somehow I could. We were almost at the top. I breathed in fresh air and went to the side, trying to get out. I found a way and dropped her on the floor. She was shaking. "Angie, it's fine, I'm here." "Tr-Troy!" I felt an object hit my head and blacked out.
Harry P.O.V
"You are nothing to her, just remember that. Go the zoo and find a cat." Why would a cat be at the zoo? Don't care. I got there as quickly as possible and bought a ticket. Cat, cat, ah! Lions are cats too right? The lions were all the way at the back. And that's when I saw her. Tied to a tree, lions surrounding her. How did she get there? I tried climbing the fence but that didn't really work. I noticed meat all over her body. Crap. No time for this. I have to climb the fence. So with all my force, I jumped high and grabbed the fence. I climbed over and dropped on the other side. A few lions turned to me but I didn't care. I walked calmly over to Angela. The lions watched my every move. Angela was unconscious so I took her. When they saw this, the lions attacked. I got scared and ran. I have to get out of here. Climb the tree. I tried climbing, it was literally impossible with her over my shoulder. Come on Harry! No I can't. I climbed higher and saw a branch. I tied her there and fell to the ground, exhausted. I hit my head and blacked out.
Liam P.O.V
I walked and looked everywhere. Nothing. I sat down at the same table where we ate. I saw a note and read it. "Look behind you." I turned around and Troy punched me. I groaned in pain and tried standing up with no success. He kicked me and I blacked out.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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