Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A challenge

A challenge Liam P.O.V
We drove back home where we quickly rushed in. We sat on the couch and talked. "So, Li, where did you have your first kiss?" Niall asked curiously. "I, it was in the movies. There were chicks but I don't know what he means by drinks. I mean, yes there was soda and stuff so..." This was a little harder than the first one but I knew we could do it. "Niall, mate, where was your first kiss?" He blushed. "At school." "Yes they are chicks at school but again, the drinks, I don't get it." "What about you Louis?" We stared at him. "The b-beach." He said nervously. "Hmmm.... And you harry?" We all turned to him. He smirked. "At a hotel. She was quiet a kisser." He chuckled. "Harry!" Louis shouted. "This doesn't make sense. All of our first kisses were at different places. They were a few chicks but the drinks. What does he mean?" I said. "Wait. Could you please read the riddle again?" Niall asked. "Drinks and chicks, my oh so perfect first kiss." I read loud and clear. "Ok... I got it!" Niall randomly shouted. "It's not our first kisses, it's his first kiss! He said MY oh so perfect first kiss. Zayn, help us. You were his best friend, where was HIS first kiss?" "For once you're finally making sense Nialler." Louis said. Niall smiled at his comment and looked at Zayn. "Well, he's never really had a girlfriend. He wasn't into girls that much so I thought he was gay but he wasn't. His first kiss. Hmmm.... His first kiss was outside a bar! Where I told Angie to meet me." He stopped speaking. "Let's go!" We got there and found another note, what's with these notes? Niall picked it up. "This is the last riddle I'm giving you cause to be honest, I suck at riddles. Haha. Anyways, after reading this, go home. A special surprise is waiting for you." I tore the page and we got to the house. I opened the door and saw a computer on the kitchen table. I looked at it and pictures of Angela could be seen. She was bleeding, her face covered with bruises. Something was written on one of the photos. "This is where you separate. Go check your rooms and you will each find a personal letter that will guide you to her but you must work alone, not in a group and you can't tell your friends what was written on your page otherwise, the girl will pay. And remember, I'm watching you so don't try anything funny." "Good luck guys." Louis said and then ran to his room. I ran to mine and found a letter. "Liam, I guess. Go to the place where she first smiled and you had fun. A challenge will be waiting for you." I grabbed my money and drove to the fun fair. I wonder what the challenge is.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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