Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Confession

Confession
Zayn P.O.V
I just confessed to her. I can't believe it but right now, we need to go to the hospital. We drove there. "Help! Our friend is bleeding!" The nurse hurried to us. Why didn't we help her while she was tweeting? I guess we were just frozen to the spot when seeing the blood, we didn't notice how much she was losing. We sat there waiting impatiently. Wanting to know how she was. Two hours passed when one of the nurses approached. "Excuse me but who is family?" No one spoke up. "So, you're all friends?" "Yes." Liam answered. "Who would like to see her first? There can only be up to three people." "I'll go." Liam, Louis and I said at the same time. Harry and Niall smiled. "Go ahead." Harry said. We went in only to find her pale and broken. "Angie?" Louis whispered. No reply. A tear fell on Louis's hand and he just wiped it away. "Lou, I know it's hard for you but it's hard for us too. We're all in this together man." Liam said quietly. I held her hand. Her face was very pale and her hand was cold. F*ck them, all of them. How could they? Insult her like she's a piece of crap. They don't even know her! I sighed and walked out. I heard them whisper, felt them staring at me so I got out the hospital and breathed fresh air. I took my phone out and went on Twitter. Screw them. I tweeted, F*ck whoever insulted @AngelaT. They're not real fans and thanks to them, she's in the hospital. Good job idiots. I switched my phone off and went back inside. There was nothing to do. Louis and Liam were at the cafeteria and Niall and Harry were with Angie. I decided to go anyways. "Umm... Guys, could you leave Angie and me alone pls?" I asked hoping to get a positive answer. "Sure, I was starting to get hungry." Niall said before he and Harry went away. I just sat there, holding her hand. "I'm sorry, for everything. If we weren't in a band, they'd never do this, I'd never have left you and we would still be together. F*ck them, f*ck me. I was such a bad boyfriend, not being there when you needed me the most, I'm sorry Angie, I'm sorry." I felt movement and looked up to see Angela's eyes with tears. "Zayn, this is not your fault, it's no one's fault." She smiled. "I love you." She whispered. "I love you too." Her lips met mine and we kissed passionately. She pulled away, blushing. "So, will you be girlfriend?" "I, I don't know Zayn. I still have to figure out my feelings. Right now, it's hard, cause I love you but there's Liam and Louis. I just don't know. Please give me time." She smiled and I nodded quickly, understanding. I stood up to leave the room when I felt her tug my shirt. "Please don't leave."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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