Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Bloody Twitter

Bloody Twitter Angela P.O.V
Twitter! The worst and best website ever! First reason why it's the best. You can tweet, post music, videos, pictures etc... BUT, people can hurt you by saying bad things to you. After the interview, I've received lots of nice comments like: Wow, @AngelaT. is so beautiful. I can see why @Real_Liam_Payne and @zaynmalik see in her!#Liangelayn. Or You're so cute @AngelaT. Or @Real_Liam_Payne and @AngelaT. Are meant to be!#Liangela. But others were hurtful like What a sl*t! @AngelaT. Or Such a wh*re! I can't believe they dated @AngelaT. Or @AngelaT. Is so fat and ugly. Kill yourself!
I had mixed feelings. At first, I was happy but then I wanted to cry. I heard a soft knock. "Come in!" I shouted. Louis came in. "Hey." "Hey, look all those comments about you, don't listen to them. If they were real fans then they would be happy that we met such an amazing girl." I smiled at his words. He was trying to comfort me and yet, I believed these people. I was fat, ugly. I don't deserve to live with them. They're kind, I'm not. "Angie! Don't even have doubts! We love you so don't ever think that you're worthless!" Yeah right. "Angie!" "What are you? A mind reader?" "I know you're having doubts. Just don't. We love you, ok?" I nodded and kissed his cheek. "Thanks Lou." He blushed a bit and left. I don't care what he said. It doesn't matter. They hate me. I hate me. I entered the bathroom and locked the door. No one needs to know. I took the razor and cut myself. It just felt so right. This pain, I'm supposed to feel it. The blood, everything, felt right. I cut more and more, not caring how much blood came out. "Angie?" Zayn shouted. I didn't answer. My head felt light and dizzy. "Angie! Open this door now!" I reached for the key, dropping it, accidentally on purpose. "Angie!" The door opened and Zayn burst in. "Angie!" He gasped seeing all the blood on the floor. "Angie!" "Leave me Zayn! This is supposed to happen! I'm ugly, fat and stupid!" "No you're not! You're beautiful, kind and there's no way on earth that you're fat! You're perfect and that's why I fell in love with you! That's why I'm in love with you!" What? I really am stupid. I saw the tears in his eyes. "Ssh... Zayn, it's fine." I kissed his cheek. Liam and Louis entered, Niall and Harry following. "Angie!" They all shouted. My phone vibrated. Another tweet. @AngelaT. Is like so stupid and fat. She's the ugliest girl I've ever seen! F*ck you, you sl*t! I replied. @LiangelaHater, I don't give a f*ck what you think! You're just a stupid b*tch who thinks you're cool just cause you insulted me and that's why One direction likes me and not you!
After I tweeted that, they went crazy. @AngelaT. You go girl! I smiled at the comment but it soon faded when I realized how much blood I've lost. My phone was covered in it but before I could stop it I just blacked out.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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