The Seventh Element Of Harmony

The Seventh Element Of Harmony

Every pony thought that there were only 6 elements of harmony but they were wrong for there was another one, INSPIRATION!

published on September 05, 2013not completed

Meeting Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, Moonlight P.O.V

Meeting Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, Moonlight P.O.V We arrived to a small but beautiful cottage. Twilight knocked and a yellow pony answered the door. "Um... Hi there." "Fluttershy! This is Moonlight Dreamer, the seventh element of harmony." "You're the seventh element of harmony?" I nodded. "Wow. Um.. Would you like to come in?" She showed us in and we sat on the couch. "Umm.. This is sort of mess, if I knew visitors were coming, I would have cleaned up." "So you're kindness right?" I asked. "Yes." she whispered. "And these are all your pets?" "Yes." "Cool." I caressed one of the squirrels while Twilight told Fluttershy about me. "Well, I don't know exactly how to teach some pony but um... I could try."
"That's fine." I said.
Suddenly, a blue ball flew in. "Fluttershy! Lets go! We need to practice! Now!"
She then looked at me. "Who's that?" "Hi I'm Moonlight Dreamer!" "Oh! You're that seventh element. Inspiration right?" "How did you.." "AJ told me."
"Well, I'm sorry for interrupting, I mean you're cool and everything but Fluttershy and I need to train." "Ok, thanks then. Bye Guys!" Twilight and I left. These guys are such great friends. I wish they were my friends. I sighed as I followed Twilight to a pink house.
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Great story! But would you mind putting new paragraphs when there is a new speaker, or please put speaker tags, thanks! I love the thought too!!
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on July 17, 2014
quite creative, really
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
Nice story, tell me when you've added more chapters!
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on September 05, 2013
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on September 05, 2013
cool story
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on September 05, 2013