this story is a thriller not suttabile for under 7 year olds it is about a girl who fell in love with a vampire and werewolf and they asked her out and they did not show up and then the next thing u know she went missing please read this shocking story
It was 11:00 pm still no sign of victoria it was very weird she just went missing like that . They saw this shadow coming from the back of the forest and it was getting closer and closer and emily was in the forest then there was a loud SCREAM! it was emily she was in the mud buried in the forest cemetery she was buried alive . The police came as fast as they could to find victoria but they saw these two men and the police went closer then it was tyler and derek and shouted to the police she is one of us now the police said scardly what do u mean ? derek shouted she is a mix of a vampire and a werewolf the police screamed away and never returned back . Victoria was now not missing and started taking blood away from pepole .
It was good, just extend it a bit and add in some full stops! :)