I made the wrong chose !

I made the wrong chose !

this story is a thriller not suttabile for under 7 year olds it is about a girl who fell in love with a vampire and werewolf and they asked her out and they did not show up and then the next thing u know she went missing please read this shocking story

published on December 10, 2012completed

The mystery

The mystery It was 11:00 pm still no sign of victoria it was very weird she just went missing like that . They saw this shadow coming from  the back of the forest and it was getting closer and closer and emily was in the forest then there was a loud  SCREAM! it was emily she was in the mud buried in the forest cemetery she was buried alive . The police came as fast as they could to find victoria but they saw these two men and the police went closer then it was tyler and derek and shouted to the police she is one of us now the police said scardly what do u mean ? derek shouted she is a mix of a vampire and a  werewolf the police screamed away and never returned back . Victoria was now not missing and started taking blood away from pepole .
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Could be better
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on August 05, 2016
Boring... (yawns)
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on June 27, 2014
to much like twilight oh does it count im 8
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on December 20, 2013
BBAAHHH to much like twilight
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on January 04, 2013
Maybe a little to much like twilight?!
It was good, just extend it a bit and add in some full stops! :)
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on December 11, 2012
It's a little like twilight
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on December 10, 2012
WOW that story was..... AWESOME xD
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on December 10, 2012