The date
Introduction It was another hard day at high school it was a dark gloomy sight . There was a beautiful girl called Victoria bell she was 17 years old and she was that beautifurl everybody had a huge crush on her . There was two new boys in school called derek dawson and tyler red victoria had a lil crush on derek and tyler that she started flirting with them. Everybody else thought there were something mysterious about them .
Chapter 1 the date
tyler walked into victoria and asked her on a date to american suprise and victoria said yes of course what time ? and tyler said 8 : 00 pm approxmaitly yes and she said yes . A couple of minuetes later she bumped into derek but he like to call himself the depressed one and then he asked her on a date to american suprise too but she didint tell him she had got plans and she aceppeted but they had to go at 8 : 00 pm too but she forgot she was going there with tyler at that time so she went home and got ready . She was home but there was something unusal going on she kept seeing this creepy shadow following her but she didint worry . She got changed into a badge and brown dress and made her way too the resturant .
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It was good, just extend it a bit and add in some full stops! :)