Mary_chan's first poetry!

Mary_chan's first poetry!

I got this request from Emo_jeff_the_killer_lover!! She is awesome peeps you guys should follow her!!! Oh and this picture was made by one of my sisters.. JayfeatherLover!!! She made it just for me.. im so grateful!! Anyway I hope you guys enjoy.. I'm kind of new at this so.

published on August 06, 2013not completed

Girl Of The Rain

Girl Of The Rain
  I saw the rain droplets patter against my window
as I walked out side to see a woman, all in blue
  I asked her why she had been outside in the rain
And she simply said she
    "Isn't the rain beautiful?"
She was a very beautiful woman I thought as I waved to her and walked back inside
   The rain left later, and when I looked outside the woman was gone.
    "where could she have gone?"
  Only the times when it rained did I see the woman..
  The woman shared me the beautiful things in life//
   all she ever said was the same thing "Isn't the rain beautiful?"
    Then one day the rain left
   And the beautiful woman of the rain was no more.
   I will never forget the girl of the rain.
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I am so blown away at how great of a writer you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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on March 04, 2016
its good
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on November 12, 2013
Awww nice
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on August 10, 2013
ya just tell me your hair color and favorite color and what stuff you like!
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on August 09, 2013
Thanks @Firestar
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on August 06, 2013
Thanks :3
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on August 06, 2013
Nice work Mary_chan. And cool art JayfeatherLover.
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on August 06, 2013
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on August 06, 2013
wow! They're amazing
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on August 06, 2013
I'm guessing you looked her up?
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on August 06, 2013
WOW WEIRD!!!!
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on August 06, 2013
i'll look her up
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on August 06, 2013
Cool. But it's as if you actually wrote a poem bout Juvia...O.O
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on August 06, 2013
I've heard of that anime!
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on August 06, 2013
The person in "Girl of the Rain" reminds me of. Character named Juvia from an anime called Fairy Tail...
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on August 06, 2013
I added another chapter peepz
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on August 06, 2013
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on August 06, 2013
i understand
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on August 06, 2013
i don't know my moms annoying me >.>
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on August 06, 2013
*confused*
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on August 06, 2013
im not understood in my time :C lol jk
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on August 06, 2013
lol! Hahhha
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on August 06, 2013
hahaha
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on August 06, 2013
I'm a poet and I know it. That rhymes. Darn. ;)
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on August 06, 2013
YEAH! Lol about the rap artist thing
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on August 06, 2013
I like it when poems don't rhyme. Poetry is supposed to be from the heart and soul. Sorry my heart and soul aren't rap artists.
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on August 06, 2013
WOW! They are amaaaaaaazing! And the best is the last one scared to sleep
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on August 06, 2013
woah really!! >.<
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on August 06, 2013
They are so good! Some of them remind me of songs I've written...
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on August 06, 2013
these are poems about my feelings lol I guess my feelings aren't catchy
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on August 06, 2013
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