The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 3

Scade's Point Of View:

I feel bad about lying to Bella like that but I couldn't just tell her the truth could I? She was just my prisoner. But I seem to be forgetting that. I look at her guiltily and see her eyes glistening with tears. We drive in silence all the way into the hotel. When I see the flashing lights creating shadows I look up to see a massive hotel. I am not shocked. I am not awed. I can not forgive myself for lying to Bella.
"Come on then," she says, her voice strangled. I nod and she walks off briskly, striding into reception. I start to follow her but a thought hits me. What if the police are looking for the car? They would be searching all the different car parks to the one that matched their number-plate. Number-plate. I turned and headed the the registration plate on the back of the car and drew out my pocket knife. I tried to saw it off but the knife was too weak. Damn. Something else red caught my eye. A fire extinguisher. I walked over, hoisted it off the stand and heaved it towards the police car. I whacked it against the side and the number-plate unhinged a bit. Just a few more hits. But before I could take a second swipe, white foam sprayed out from the extinguisher and exploded in my face. I shrieked and tried to direct it away but I dropped it in the process. Damn, damn, damn, damn. It had wedged itself underneath the car, pressing down and squeezing out more white foam. Battling furiously, I ripped off the remains of the number-plate and threw it into the bushes.   Bella looked casually out of the reception window. I waved to her but she stared at me in confusion.
"What the heck?" she mouthed at me. I shrug meekly. At least I got the number-plate off.

Sorry this chapter was so short, I didn't have enough time to keep going. Hope you are enjoying it!
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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