The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 16

"Are you sure you want to do this?" Niall asked doubtfully when he saw me the next week. We'd been planning our escape - sorry, 'journey' to Hollywood for the whole week.
"You don't want to pull out now, do you?" I teased.
"No, I just-"
"Good. I'll talk to dad and distract him while you sneak into the plane. Simple."
"Okay," Niall said slowly. I raised an eyebrow and ran over to my dad who seemed to be almost guarding the plane.
"Dad?"
"Yes?"
"Do you trust me?" I could see Niall creeping over to the plane.
"I'm your father!"
"That wasn't my question. Do you trust me?" I repeated. Niall was in the plane now, waiting for me.
"Well - I- er-"
"Yes?"
"To be honest, no, I don't trust you."
"Then you shouldn't be surprised by this." I kneed him in the chin. He sprang back in shock and clutched his face in agony. That was all I needed. I sprinted to the plane and jumped in beside Niall as the door slid closed.
"Come back here now, Niall Barnes!" My dad roared. "Or you're fired!"
"I'll rehire you in a few weeks when I'm eighteen," I begged, watching the doubt on his face. He considered this, and then nodded.
"Bella! Niall! You come here NOW before I call in a helicopter after you!"
The embarrassment that would cause...it was worth seeing Scade again, just one more time. "Bye dad!" I shouted over the noise of the plane, and we were off, up in the sky. I could see my dad shaking his fist and yelling, but I couldn't hear him.
"Do you think I did the right thing?" I asked doubtfully.
"Of course, Miss Bella."
I beamed at him and enjoyed the view, watching my town from a Birdseye view. My eyelids felt heavy and soon the power of sleep took over.
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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