Mobian Girls

Mobian Girls

Camille and her companion assistant, Wolfie discovers a magical mirror that transfer them to a planet Earth, where humans roam. There, she meets her humanized friends and a wicked teenage wreckage, named Kameo, who always finds ways to destoy the life of Camille.

published on February 27, 2015not completed

The competition (Pt 1)

Camille: *Following Griffin, calling for her* EXCUSE ME! Just one quick second?
Griffin: *Turns around* Who is that?
Random guy #2: Its the girly-girl with the lavender hair!
Griffin: *Pushes through, looking aggressive*
Wolfie: *Gulps and hides in pocket*
Griffin: Who are you, how do you know me?
Camille: Um...
Griffin: You're addressing the school's most athletic and best track runner to EVER exist. You think you're better than me?
Camille: No....?
Griffin: Now you're punking out on me. I don't got time for your sissy games, sister. -.-
Camille: Fine! You want a competition? We'll get a competition.
Griffin: I can't believe I'm saying this, but...*Addresses to the other team* boys you got yourself a new recruited leader! *Smirks* You. ARE. ON.
Camille: *Returns the smirk*
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on June 26, 2015
This is amazing! I haven't read a story this funny for ages XD
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on May 18, 2015
Awesome!!!
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on March 19, 2015
Oh wow cool!
When am I appearing?
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Soon!
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
XD
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Yep, So Wolfie's a hamster! And Tails just told Camille off. XD
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Idk I can't really decide
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on March 06, 2015
BTW, what was the best part?
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on March 06, 2015
Oh hell yes
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on March 06, 2015
@SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
You love puns, do you?
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on March 06, 2015
I have a feeling sh*ts about to get real! (Pun intended)
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome I wonder what Shara gonna be like X3 when cam tell her(cam's)that her crown is missing!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Lol. Love the new chap!
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Its not boring? I was even bored writing it!
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on March 03, 2015
You already know that I play Spike, right?
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on March 03, 2015
Nah! I enjoyed it!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Such an amazing story!
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Thanks.
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Your welcome!
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
Yes!!!!!!!X3 Shara is so random!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT SO!!!!!!!
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on March 01, 2015
LOL!
Guessing I'm not in this yet because I'm in Scorchia?
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yeah.
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I'm thinking of a good cameo appearance.
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
Awesome!
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on February 27, 2015
Love it!
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Thanks, sorry for the delay, I was trying to find a good start of the story.
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Nah! Don't kill yourself over it! Its an awesome start!
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on February 27, 2015
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on February 27, 2015