The dangerous circle

The dangerous circle

This story is about two friends named Jay and Tobias since they were kids they like to play finding objects, one day Tobias found an old magical book that contain black magic he asked Jay to help him open it because the book has a lock that need to be open with a key. Both open the book and strange force come out of the book to take them forever.

published on July 20, 2013completed

Strange symbols appear in the book

Strange symbols appear in the book
Tobias and Jay were so disappointed because the book is cover in blank there are no letters, no pictures, not even a single thing. Tobias replied "I can't believe I waste my time picking up this dumb book on the street" Jay exclaimed "don't worry it just an old book no body wants" Tobias screamed "aaaah I can't believe it I want to sell this book, but what person on earth want a book who doesn't have anything inside". Tobias feel so bad later he through the book very hard against the wall then a little paper flew away Jay grab it and say "Tobias come see this" Tobias go where Jay was they see the little paper, Jay read the paper that says "please if you find this book never open it because this book is possess" Jay and Tobias laugh thinking that has to be a prank that someone wants to put on them. Then the book started moving Tobias screamed "the book is moving let's run Jay" Jay responded "yes let's get out of here", the book begin to fly strange signals appear later the book open a big circle and started sucking everything of the antiquities shop Jay and Tobias was grabbing the counter with their hands they try to escape from the big menace. Jay couldn't hold on much longer and the big circle suck him in, Tobias screamed "Jay no, come back" then the circle suck Tobias too the circle grew and suck the entire antiquities shop. Later the circle disappeared the next day people were looking for the antiquities shop, but they couldn't find it not even the guys the only left was the book and key since that day no body see Jay and Tobias anymore their parents keep looking for them, but with no succeed. Their parents keep waiting for them until Jay and Tobias finally come back to home. THE END
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I love it + 5 stars+ story to favorite:D
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on July 15, 2015
Yeah I use it to put more interesting the story
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on July 25, 2013
Awsome story and epic pic its the ring from lotr
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on July 22, 2013
Thanks, but I have to make some corrections
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on July 20, 2013
I luv your story! Its really awesome!
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on July 20, 2013