A Bright Light

A Bright Light

This is just a short story that i wrote at school in an english lesson,so please comment.

published on July 15, 2013completed

Rockworth Hospital 1:54pm

Waking up in shock; gasping for breath to find herself in a hospital bed; with her two parents watching over her in relief. Amelia seemed to be a bit confused at first but then managed to ask the question, "What happened to the fire?" (It had turned out to be alright, also Bethany seemed to be recovering just as well.)
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really good! But I want to know where she is!
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