Lover Or Murderer?

Lover Or Murderer?

well guys this is what I have so far on the jtk story.. I need some feedback.. should I keep writing? :)

published on July 14, 2013not completed

The begging Of the end~

      At around eight o' clock I told my parents I was heading to bed.
        I walked upstairs, took a quick shower, and walked back into my bedroom and onto the balcony.
          It was a beautiful sight of the sunset, I thought as I looked down and the wind blew through my hair.
        When I looked at the neiboring house I saw a boy with what looked like some sort of white hoodie and black hair and pants, I couldn't see his face, I could only see him walk inside the house.
           I didn't think anything of it but just friendly and active neibors.
        I tiredly walked out of the balcony and slide the door shut and locked it, and closed the curtains.
          I tired then wobbled to my bed, where I fell into a deep sleep.
           The next morning I woke up barely in time to get ready and to go, leaving no time for breakfast.
       My parents dropped me off at the small high school and waved goodbye.
          I started walking to the front door, when I saw the same boy I had seen over the balcony, I walked closer and waved.
              But as I got closer he seemed to shy away from me, still not revealing his face.
             I sighed and walked back to the front door and inside the school, where I searched for my first class.
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Add some more chapters please add lke 30 in your own time no rush tho! promise!
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on August 04, 2016
it's great but I don't think Creepypasta is supposed to be a love story. I am not trying to sound like a hater in all but that's MY opinion. Great story. keep that in mind.
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on June 17, 2016
Good so far...Haven't read other ones yet!
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on February 13, 2014
This is really really good! :D
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on December 26, 2013
This is amazing!:D
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on September 01, 2013
This is awesome! :)
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on July 20, 2013
no no guys of course im making more its not finished! :3
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on July 17, 2013
That was actually a really good story, Mary. I really want you to make 4. Do it!!!
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on July 16, 2013
is that good =___=
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on July 15, 2013
K well i guess imma make more then... sweet xD
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on July 14, 2013
Got that right Im a murderer
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on July 14, 2013