Ami and Rose

Ami and Rose

(Please don't think I'm babyish! I had to write a fairy-tale for school! LOL) This story is about two fairies named Ami and Rose. They go on a adventure... Will they save their village?

published on December 04, 2012completed

The Poison + The Ending

“Welcome girls! Let’s go inside to go and get the prepared lunch. Fiona!” The wolf announced.
             
The moment the wolf ended his sentence a lady with a dark dress came dashing down the stairs. She pulled off her cloak so you saw her grey hair.

“Ha-ha!! You stupid little fairies fell for the trick! Prepare to face your doom! I am Fiona, the evil witch and unless you two work for me, I will DESTROY your precious town, Fairy Flutter.” The evil witch, the strange voice, Fiona said.
“Oh.” Rose stepped forward and held out a strawberry. “Well, I will work for you, that way I can study the castle. I’m a big brainbox.”
“Rose?! What are you doing?” Ami panicked.
“Shhh Ami, can’t you see that I’m speaking?” Rose replied. “I would like to PAY YOU for letting me make the best life choice ever. Here, will you accept this strawberry that I picked as a payment?”

Fiona looked surprised. “Thank you.” She said.
              
Then she took a bite out of the strawberry and fell to the ground with a loud thump. Rose looked pleased with herself and Ami stared at her with her mouth in the shape of an ‘o’.

“H..h…how?” Ami stammered.

Rose smiled at her and winked. “Well, we picked thousands of strawberries and I was going to use the poisonous one for that school experiment but this was a real emergency.”

She then turned to the wolf. “I guess you scatter before I give you a little treat.”
             
Without even arguing the wolf ran out of the door and disappeared into the woods. The two girls went back home and told everybody about their adventure. Fairy Flutter was safe now.

And they lived happily ever after!
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
NOOO...
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on July 17, 2014
Thanks.
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on March 26, 2013
Ok, this isn't babyish. This is actually pretty good, but be aware hun, watch your grammar and also, you don't need to capitalize words that don't need to be capitalized, but other than that, very good and very well plotted out.
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on March 26, 2013
:)
Hehe thanks.
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on January 03, 2013
I love it
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on January 03, 2013
Thank you!
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on December 08, 2012
kinda its fantastic
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on December 07, 2012
I used some layouts of other fairy-tales, you guys can see that, eh?
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on December 07, 2012
Hehe
Thanks.
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on December 07, 2012
This is cool!
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on December 06, 2012
Thanks.
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on December 05, 2012
Epiccc!!!!!! :D
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on December 05, 2012
Hope you guys enjoy it!
I'll post another story I wrote later!
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on December 04, 2012