Fire Creasent Flames

Fire Creasent Flames

This story is about a teenage fire magic user, who meets a wind magic user, a year after all of her family's death.

published on December 02, 2012not completed

Christian's First Day

Christian's First Day
The next morning Avery woke up. Christian was still asleep. She stood up and walked into the bathroom, brushed her teeth put her hair in a ponytail, and got dressed in a light gray tee-shirt and black jeans. She walked back out and sat on her bed. She grabbed her black and white shoes and picked up her charm bracelet. She slid it on her wrist. She walked towards the door and once again, she picked up the family sword and slid it in her pant loop. I was almost time to leave, figuring she shouldn't leave Christian alone, she threw a pillow at him and said "Rise and shine Sleeping Beauty!" He woke up and said "What the?!" "Wake up Doofus, it's time to leave for school." He stood up and walked into the next room (bathroom). Moments later he came out dressed in gray. She walked otside, he followed. An hour later, they were at the village. Another half an hour they were at the school.
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It's great, but I would add more dialouge, other than that, I love this story! :)
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on November 05, 2013
Okay, so, you guys... I would really appreciate if you told me, here in the comments whether or not you liked it. If you don't, sorry I dissapointed you. If you do, great! and I'd love to hear from either side if the crowd. Thanks! :D
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on December 02, 2012