Fire Creasent Flames

Fire Creasent Flames

This story is about a teenage fire magic user, who meets a wind magic user, a year after all of her family's death.

published on December 02, 2012not completed

The Attack

The Attack
She held the Fisher family sword tightly with both her hands in front of her. That's when she ran towards the crystal blue dragon. The dragon had attempted to freeze her, but the dragon missed as Avery kept moving out of harm's way. It kept trying to freeze her with its fierce breath. She fell, then she rolled forward and stood up without using her hands. The dragon attempted to freeze her again when she used her sword as a shied, and put the Fisher faming sword in front of her, the ice reflected off and froze a tree. The dragon tried it again, when she ran behind a rock. She thought about her plan, and decided to use her sword as a shield. The next attempt she tried this and the ice backfired and froze the ice dragon instantly. To assure the icy dragon's death, she walked up towards it, and with a swing of the sword, she cut off it's head. The blue, crystal dragon was dead. The police officials, mayor, firemen, etc., thanked her for her services to the village of Fire Creascent. An hour later, she lazily loitered home, even tireder than she was before she had slayed the tremendous beast. It took about three hours, rather than one, being as tired and slow as she was to get home. When she home, on the porch step, standing their was a guy, her age, with curly blonde hair. She walked up slowly to the porch...        TO BE CONTINUED...
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It's great, but I would add more dialouge, other than that, I love this story! :)
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on November 05, 2013
Okay, so, you guys... I would really appreciate if you told me, here in the comments whether or not you liked it. If you don't, sorry I dissapointed you. If you do, great! and I'd love to hear from either side if the crowd. Thanks! :D
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on December 02, 2012